Please update again!

Yr insane Bella for thinking such option to be the best

Have you moved to a different site for the rest of this story? I have read all 25 chapters & really need closure!

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you Hmm

Hey there, I really loved reading this amazing story. I truly appreciate your work and hope that you will continue writing more chapters for this wonderful and mindblowing story. And I want to thank you for such a magnificent plot. So thank you and please please please continue writing more chapters.

COULD YOU PLEASE FINISH IT

When bella started fighting with Edward aginst jake I wanted to beat her up just because she kissed jake that gives Edward the right to hurt jake . First of all when Edward left jake was just trying to help bella exude him if he started to fall in love with bella . He just wanted to give her better . But apparently bella was to dumb.

OMG I LOVE YOU CRAZY BITCH

Hmmm, were the naked the whole time?

please finish its a great story

I have skimmed through this storyand it looks really good so I added it to my favs. is there a chance you will finish it. x

write more i love it

i must admit, its really good, but you are all for constructive critisism right?

- try to make it a bit more detailed.. you know, the LEMONY bits, with desctiptions of the "body" parts, and is there noooo pubic hair or what?

oh, and there are soooo many spelling mistakes.. like, silly little ones... :/

but im only on chapter three.. still, good job lol ;)

OH my God I can't wait to see what happens next

This iz a wonderl story and I hope u update soon it's been a very good story tho it got confusing for a cuople minutes but it's stilll good and I do hope u update soon.