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AWESOME!
Hannon-le!

Hi! I like your story very much. It's short, but it made me think a little more about Elrond and Aragorn. I love stories about their relationship and I like stories where characters are not ideal. Your Aragorn seems... real, and Elrond too. Sorry if I made mistakes because English is not my home language.

GO ELROND!

I was looking for some nice story with Aragorn. You gave me more... It's beautiful.

Aw that was sweet! How did you come up the idea? I loved the images you used, a little boy playing and trying to be an adult then an adult who isn't trying to impress anyone and know that you can't take on the world alone. I'm new to reading fan fiction..I haven't even sign up for this sight yet. But I would love it if you wrote another story like this..or if you already have I'll try and find it. Take care please don't stop and blessed be.

This is cute and so true. Nice POV.

The thought of Estel running over tables and at elves really brought a smile to my face. I liked the slow transformation from a little child fighting with his imaginative foes to a kingly warrior battling against formidable enemies. I especially loved Elrond's point of view and Estel will always be his little warrior.

Fine piece. I like it!

Just what I needed, a short story of his Estel and his growing. Here's to many more stories of the little or not so little warrior. Another fantastic story.

...Wow, that was just really weird.

Gawd, I hate thinking about Aragorn as a stupid little kid.

-grin-

Lovely piece to see Estel's slow transformation into Strider then Aragorn and eventually Elessar. Nice juxtaposition between the childhood imagined battles and the real adult battles.

Couple of typos:

he is stained with blood, the blood of his enemies and him own - should be "his" own

During his childhood years I have tended to many a bloodied nose and broken bone, yet he always insisted he was fine. - using "have" in there switches it in midstream to present tense from being past tense; to preserve your word count, it would work if you simply changed "have" to "had"

Off to read the other one...

- Deandra

That was soo sweet!

Aw you made me cry...*sniff sniff*...

Anyways, love the canon. You even took direct quotes of Elvish!

:)

As I told you on group, this was simply wonderful.

Hn. Nice stuff this. I haven't seen a lot of good shorter pieces that really capture Aragorn and Elrond's relationship, at least what I could read into it.

Elrond did his best to raise Aragorn, and I think he had a great deal of fatherly love for the young man. That's my one big gripe with the movie trilogy, we really didn't see a lot of that affection, except for that one scene in ROTK when he advises him to be a king and in FOTR where he again, tries to inspire him. Other than that, he acts like a pain in the films, which is annoying because I always liked his character.

So props for this.