I looked it up and was surprised. 私生子 is read shiseiji. The kanji read as I/me, life, and child. It was weird seeing the kanji used for I (often read watashi, here as shi since it's in a multi-kanji word) in there.

The new knowledge etymology of bastard. Thanks for your information

For god sake's why can't it be just those three girls? Why does there have to be even more girls add to the freaking harem? I can't seem to get away from these damn giant harem stories.

You can spout whatever bullshit you want yes, too bad it makes for a piss poor story... Doing things just cause you want to doesn't make a good one at all.

Literally no reason for the prank, he just wanted to see if people would cry. How lame. Still able to use his techniques even though it isn't Chakra any longer, wtf. He somehow knows how to escape the Soul Society despite never being there before, yeah sure... Renounces his name and goes for 2 of the most used OC names ever. Kazama and Arashi, well done.

What a shame, grammar is really good too. Your awful attitude towards writing and making things fit with whatever you wrote is dreadful. My story, can put whatever bull shit I want... Ha

GPA indeed. It brings even the mightiest of us to our knees.

Okay, I can't take anymore of "Socio-Naruto" (or maybe it's "Naruto-path" [?]). It was a good attempt, but I say goodbye.

Okay, this is a strange story and I personally could not read most of the beginning due to the dark nature of it, but I am starting to like where this is going in terms of Naruto's relationships. After all, Hinata DOES love him, and so will the others.

Reiyoku is spirit energy
Reiatsu is the force that Reiyoku gives off
Reishi is spirit particles which the bounts absorb I think
ur welcome

while i dont know the kanji for it, bastard in jap. is Teme is it not? not being an ass or anything just point out this one thing. oh and, by the way, you make on hell of a story.

Annoying wangty garystu in place of Naruto this story is balls.

hope to see it continued

so i am not the only one reminded of axel

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

yes they are i do the same-thing

Well that was anti-climatic, you win. At last you aren't hurt. Your GPA does indeed come first and I can understand that entirely. Wish you'd put up some warning at the beginning of the story but oh well, should have been tipped off by the last update date. Time to check your stories. If you have one recently I'll give you that proper critique after some rest. If you don't, well you'll probably never see me again. So um, bye.