While the story is interesting, the characters don't really like up and their actions are all over the place, especially Hiruzen. Sorry, but it's bothering me too much and I can't keep following. Their actions are too implausible.

is this based on anakin and Padme?

when the academy teacher said "to those who did not pass better luck next year. your all dismissed." I read the last part as your all dumbass's

Some of the things you write don't make sense. Normal venom out poisons wouldn't do much to Naruto. Even asp venom wouldn't be deadly with his healing factor. I'm also getting annoyed by you copping out by stating stuff like, "it happened like in the anime." At least do a very brief summary.

The hokage isn't that powerless. I don't know why you're writing it that way. Nikki offence, but this story's only saving grace is a decent story. You kill me with your dialogue. I mean your grammar could use some work but the conversations are so bland. The dialogue doesn't feel unique and some of what you have characters saying doesn't fit them at all.

Pls write more chapters I like this

I liked the Epilogue!

Excellent story

Hahahaha I love naru kure matchups and this was gold

Great job

Great story. Naruto did great as well. I can't help but think Kurenai wouldn't have takenthat lying so well.

SIR YOU ARE NOW OFFICIALLY ONE OF MY FAVORITE AUTHOR! This is one of the best NaruKure fic I've read and I love the idea of growing wings and stuff. I also read your other fic KURENEI PRIDE though its kinda sad that you've abandon it, hoping you will update it in the future. The whole Hyuga thing here is truly evil and it makes me laugh. I thought I'll end up hating Sakura here but I did not because of the twist and for that you deserve a round of applause! CHEERS!

THIS SUCKS

Well this was an interesting ending

Well this was interesting still shocking that Pedomaru could convince everyone glad he's dead though