Oh, I loved this! You really should have continued it, it's a piece of art3 Wonderful, spectacular, and unique

I wish you would add some more chapters to this...it's should a good story.

0.o Wow. So angsty, yaay Lovely angst.

Heartless of me, but there it is.

Anyway, I LOVES this story (even tho' I'm not a TobiDei fan). There's such a nice flow to it, even though it is rape. And, it's my favorite pace for a story, though it may move too slowly for some people.

Anyway, keep writing; you're awesome!

One. Of. The. Best. Stories. I. Have. Ever. Read.

(I'm emo)

still, this story is awesome with portraying how Tobi is when he is in Madara mode.

Again, this story is fucking awesome.

wow I mean just wow. That was just an story. I can't really describe it. I felt sad for Deidara for having that happen to him. I liked how you wrote it. I really didn't know what to expect when I started this but I just thought it was so good! I loved the poem at the end. I mean this is just what I'm saying is that I think that poem in the end can really speak to some people. I mean It certainly did to me.

it is ooc but thats what makes it a pretty good story.i,personally, have never thought that tobi would do something like that to deidara but, if you do think about it tobi would be capable of doing it.

O.O

You scared the shit out of me.

Dear god.

Why Tobi? WHY?

Thou hath shattered the fragile line of all that is right in the god damned world.

Yay, this proves my point that Deidara would cut. Now I can follow his footsteps and cut too! :D

wow...just...wow. I was actually thinking "aww how cut-wth?" when I read this. It's amazingly well written.

omg,that was a very well written one-shot!i loved it!

i think you wrote it kind of realistic and i like that this is a true rape story and not one where the victim falls in love with the rapist. good job

This is a very good story. The writing flows and the subject is broached maturely and very well, it really makes me feel for Deidara.

I read your authors note about why you wrote this, and without sounding like I'm intruding, I would like to say that I hope what ever is troubling you passes.

Best wishes

Cip

I'M EFFING CRYING. OH MY GAWD. ;o; Poor Deidara! Ohmygawd poor Deidara... -Shudder.-

Damn that had me just SHIVERING at the thought of Tobi getting so violent like that! And Deidara as his target. Good Gawd. Still crying.

But I'll give you this. It was written AMAZINGLY well. It had the power to make me cry. And I'm still scared. How am I gonna sleep now? I'm gonna have NIGHTMARES. XD

In other words, through my mindless rant of my current emotional state...I found it to be amazing. -Nod.- Very much so.

x poor guy... nicely written

Great story. And I understand, the doctors at the mental institute aka "Wellstone" told me to do the same. You write awesome and in a unique way.