I’m so sad there is no more to the story!

I really enjoyed this story. I expected that in Ch. 17 the story would have an ending. Once again I'm disappointed. I wish that instead of saying the story would definitely be continued, you had come back and said that it wasn't going to be finished after all. I need to be sure to check and make sure a story is complete.

You said you wouldn't abandon this story at the end of chapter 17, yet it's the last chapter!

Love the plot... Great story... I hope you find enough inspiration to continue writing this fantastic story

please update soon. great story/great writing skills

Oh no! Is there no more? Are you thinking of writing more? It's been such a fantastic story and I'm dying to know what else happens.

Can you make more ? Please!

bellas type is where she wants too be come a vampire and when her and edward go there honey moon it was the most sweetest thing ever but little as you no bella ends up getting pregnet and the baby grows very very quickly inside of her and she feels much pain inside her body she starts getting cravings and others , edward comes into the room bella suspects that thats shes pregnet so she tells that too edward and he he gets a little bit mad

finishing...

update soon you have not updated since 2008.

REally great story. You are a terrific writer. Know it's been awhile, but I hope you continue. thank you

it's about time!

Great story! Very original plotline after Laurent. I'd love to read more!

THIS HAS BEEN REALY GOOD STUFF. THANK YOU. PLEASE KEEP EVERYONE INFORMED OF ANY NEW CHAPTERS THAT YOU POST. I FOR ONE WILL BE WAITING EMPAITATONSLY FOR THEM. THAN YOU THANK YOU...ARIZONA BLANCA LOBO

sigh..and grumble..man I didn't even look to see if it was completed and the last update was years ago

ugh

I know you wrote this a long tie ago, but I wanted to say how much I enjoyed the layout you did on this chapter.

Your POV's are done well, especially Alice

I love the subtle way you present the core of the issues

Nice work

Cheers

3D