oh gosh! that was brilliant! well done! it was such a good story! im adding it to my favrites list DEFINATELY!

100/10!X

Wow i really really liked this one. Yes it was slightly rushed in certain places, but it's incredible. Absolutely incredible. The only part i thought could've been written better/longer was when Dick was explaining what happened. Please keep on writing and never ever stop!

Aw, Kory loved as soon as he did his famous smile! lol

Lol, I love Lya-even though I can't pronounce her name...I would have so died relizing that Dick knew what she said about her liking him, or I would have hurt her then run like a maniac...

Hm...Kory jealous of Dick and Lya, maybe thats when I would hurt her...but not just her, also Dick! But maybe that fall from the tree would be good enough.

The marble cone snail...shocked to see she was holding it for 2 reasons, one; its poisonous and 2; its dead.

OMG, I would soo not have gone and jumped over the river with the chance that I would be able to catch the vine!

Dick seriously must have loved that shirt seriously stuck to her. I actually find itfun pulling clothing up from that after being soaked on your skin, it feels funny.

Lol, I loved the first time she met Gar, she completly dissed him good!

I LOVE Lya! "I am sure that will change soon..." She's thinking...well...not like Kory! lol

Dick so did not see her awesome strength coming! I loved how he was struggling while Kory didn't even have to try! It was cute and funyn when Dick kissed her to get free, a last hope i guess.

Aw! So sad when he had to go bye-bye and Kory went all boo-hoo! Stupid Germany! Starting a World War-again!

Omg, I freaked out when she found out her best friend and sister was gone! o.m.g.

O.m.g. So that's what the "I'm sorry" was for...

Ha-ha, Pennyworth, funny last name...I also love going into limos...even though I only went to one, and it was small...

OMG! Dick is so stupid! Yelling out that he didn't want her here! Did he forget she understood English? wow.

Loved the ending! so cute! And if this was real, I would hope that soon, they wouldn't have to wait for a month!

If you wrote this out as a chapter story, you would have a huge crowd of people with torches and pitch forks outside your house. lol.

So can't wait to see your-attempts. lol

i really liked it! greatt job!

alright i am here now and so sorry for the delay.

wow longer than dear starfire? that is history and learning all that jazz about war! at least school is almost over. if they taught it about titans history, i woulnt be so bored anymore.

ooh soldiers from america, could one possibly be richard? lol

lol they will definitely kick some butt.

aww i sense the budding of a great relationship! hehe

how old is she in this story? she certainly seems taken with him, although they are there only to protect the island and women, they dont know the secret.

lya seems like the friend who likes to intrude in everything.

what ever happened to koma to make her that way, perhaps the truth will be revealed later on in the story.

hehe lya seems a bit touched in the head.

and on day two, there was more fun had and plans to have a tour, things seem to be going smoothly

right there with ya kor *drools into bucket* ah.

hmm this is a change in story tactics, kory is showing richard around and telling him customs. lol

hmm so richard is just freely allowed to spend the whole day on the island?

aw hehehe even on tamaran, gar cant catch a break.

yaya! the kiss finally happened, it was so cute and it was also a blast watching richard get his butt handed to him by kory.

nononono they have to be all right, i hope lya was able to keep koma safe.

the temple served as a beacon of help huh? well at least they gave them some form of hope to look up to.

no poor kory and lyas mom, as if losing richard werent enough.

how do you break that to your family members? that has got to be the most difficult thing ever.

oh not one of those messengers, they cant get a sentence without saying and i said,lol it is the same as using like incessently.

ooh he sent her a plane ticket, how romantic, is something wrong with dick?

aw we even get a bit of bruce and alfred in this story, that is what i call well rounded, its got everything

kory can get it out of him

yay good job, although im sure kory could stand to talk to rachel too. she blames herself as well for the death of her friend and sister, maybe now that dick and kory are back together though, things will get better

what? why does she have to leave? make her stay!

rushed? it was in no way rushed, it was over 110 words, that is incredible, you had me hanging on every word. truly awe inspiring

lol it took quite some time to review and read as well. also none of your stories are boring and you really should stop beating yourself.

whew im done

keep it up

Great Story! And I don't think it's rushed at all!

AW! THIS STORY IS SO SWEET AND SO AWESOME AND I LIKE IT ALOT!

i would say more but im just sort of speechless, like wow, this story is really good

That...was..so...long! Hahah! Now, about the story..I absolutely love it! Hihih..besides the fact that France is my second favorite country( next to the Philippine,of course,) I absolutely love studying the world wars. Hey! I actually looked for Tamaran on the map. I didn't find it though. Is it really there?(please answer that question.)

About your other stories, they are NOT boring at all! Don't ever say that!

Well, update soon!

GOD bless,

Love this story. It is very good.

I didn't think it was rushed at all! I thought it was brilliant actually. You did a great job with making the plot seem realistic and with showing the emotion of the characters. If you wanted to continue on this thread, you could do little scenarios when they are together the next time (or whenever). Just an idea you can take or leave, but I will be satisfied with whatever you choose. Again, Amazing Job!

T'aw... That was sweet. And I don't mind length. Nearly all my stuff is super long.

Raven as a psychologist. That... suits her perfectly. Loads better than a writer.

Eve

Amazing! This is better then all of your chapters and one-shots put together, and probably just as long lol. Who knew you could make history/war romantic and interesting. I hope you post some stories/one-shots like this soon cause it's bloody amazing and really shows off your writing talents.

That was really good! you portrayed the hard times of ww2 pretty well.

~waves~

Oh...my...gosh...I loved this stoy! It was truley breathtaking. XOXO xStarfirexRobinxo

i really liked it and didn't feel like it was rushed at all