How cute.

I love a good double entandre.

LOL, yay! CloudxAerith x3

Very Cute!

You have a very good grasp of the interaction between Cloud and Aeris. However, I do think that some of the language that you use doesn't really match the tone of the game. It's not often enough to really hurt the fic, but I think it's one of the thing that could be improved, and which would really help the fic a lot overall. If you want specific examples, just PM me and I'll let you know.

Overall, I enjoyed it. Of course, I'm always a sap for good Cloud/Aeris romance, or really, romance in general.

The double-entendre at the end was particularly good. It might be worth working this metaphor more thoroughly into the rest of the fic.

In any case, good stuff, and I'll probably be digging through the rest of your archives, and leaving reviews where appropriate :).

Awh this was so good !

I thought it would of been Yuffie who caught them, because she is the normal choice. I'm glad you chose someone else, and I could imagine Barret to act that way! Right more !