this was a cute one. I liked it. But I want a happy hagi now.

If I were Haji, I would be like, "BITCH GET YOUR OWN DAMN SANDWICH"

But if I were Saya I would be like, "PWEAAAAAAAAAAAASE? SAMICH! SAMICH! SAMICH! PLEASE I WANNA SAMICH! GET ME A SAMICH! PLEEEASSEE HAJI?"

But what you wrote was totally awesome. Hahaha. Jealousy. Works every time.

lol Saya yr cruel! that was very funny...it seems a lot ppl have watched or read Twilight n Blood... I have too!

yay short, sweet, and fluffy! poor haji...

good job! :D

i loled a few times.. nice and complete *sighs dreamily*

i really like this it was funny

Aw~! Poor Haji! But, that's why we all love him. Am I right or am I right?

tee hee.

i'm usually not the giggling type, okay, not at all, but it's so cute.

ahaha

nnoce job. :)

So funny, and poor dear Chevalier. Nice story, really ;-)

that was so cute! it made me laugh. :3 Darn, i'm hungry for a sandwich now...

*points to brother* YOU, HAJI! FETCH ME A SANDWICH!

Brother: Who is Haji?

you know, I just realized something about the disclamer. It's not really true. You own the sandwich, which is pretty dang cool.

Tee hee. Excellent. (I'll bet Bella and Edward would do this, too.)

Simply brilliant!

Ah... Poor Haji. :( Meanie sandwich. Demonic pickles fault, Not SAYA's! Hmpf!

I love the story. Very cute! :)

*Huggles*

I absolutely love it!