Interesting start. Can't wait for more.

Please Continue!

can't wait for the next instalment

I can't wait to see whats goin down on another note 2 jobs in this economy WTF you must really bust your ass to stay in business you have my respect later

Very different from what I am used to. You have my attention.

Wow, two kids vs whole evil village. And there's no one to help them. I just hope you have some plan for next chapters, since I want to know how it will all turn out. Right now it looks like it will end in next chapter, with both of our heroes dead after Sandaime betrayal.

I wonder if "dark" in summary means "sad story" or "main characters more brooding then canon Sasuke" or "heroes burning place that wronged them, and doing it with smile on their faces". Hopping it's the last one.

Great i cant wait to read about the plot to kill Naruto. update soon and love the story so far.

another good chapter. this is a really interesting story.

even the third that is interesting continue

good chapter man i love how you made Hashi so evil.

ASKAWHAT? this story just started out so awesome. i cant wait to see what is next.

Keep up the good work.

OK I won't kill you ya jackass LOL I got no right to talk hell I can't remember when I last updated so I guess I'm a jackass too good work though later

Great Chapter..

Next time update SOONER!

wow. I love it. Poor naru and hina. I feel so sorry for them