This is a very sweet story, I like how you wrote from another family's perspective. I hope you continue writing this, even though its been some time since you last updated

This,is very good well done its mean how they took Noemi I feel sorry for her :(

I really like this chapter well done :D

ohh that was really good. i wish you would continue it!

i really want to see what happens!

I loved the conversations of "when did you first suspect" fantastic.

You really are a very talented writer-when you don't let the Russian pork and people staring into the mountains get in the way. :P

:D

O that was really good, I love the Host, and I love your story :) Please continue it!

You could always post this in the Misc. Books section.

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I'm sad that there is only one review for this so far. I'm sure The Host fanfictions will gain popularity eventually. And when it does, you can say that you were there since the beginning.

This is just getting better and better. :) I love how every now and then the soul comes through, in the middle of this classically human bonding experience. Beautiful!

Utterly heart-wrenching! This is beautiful, Ish. I can't wait to see where you go with it (assuming there will be more, of course).