Please please please continue this!
I need to know what happens!
You're an incredible writer xx

Hello, first of all, you are a really good writer, and I have to admit that you have that thing, that makes you feel the book or novel, i mean what you read. You probably already notice that english is quite not my first language, but i can explain myself, i just hope you understand what am i trying to say; anyway, second, i really like your story, and i know you probably stopped writting this story years ago, but, maybe if you can, i would appreciate it if you continue this story. Thanks for reading this, and hope you have a good day or evening, depends on when do you read this.

Where is the next chapter ?

Wow this story is amazing! This is definitely one of my favorites! I'm secretly praying for a chapter 17,18,19,20... and so on. Update soon!
-Sasha

really gd , plz continue soon )

Good Story! Update Please!

Great Story! Update Please!

That's an interesting point of view and I'm glad that you still brought Ziva into the picture. I hope you will update soon!

:O

PLEASE continue(:

Are you going to update this ever? because its really good! i'm totally intrigued!

wow!

this is amazing!

please continue this !

i really like the story!

although, it would be really nice if tony tries to make gibbs jealous by hitting on jenny or something...

i love this story, but i think that jenny could have spent the night with ziva, :P

Israeli is not a language (i made that mistake in one of my fics too :P) ziva speaks Hebrew and there is of course Arabic, but im pretty sure jenny knows some Hebrew as she translates something ziva says to Gibbs once.

i am ADDICTED TO THIS STORY! i cant wait for the next update!