You broke my heart with this. I love Donna to death, and she and the Doctor were wonderful and hilarious, but I could really feel the tension and sorrow in every line - Rose was all over this, even in her absence. That's a special kind of sadness, the kind that lives among the laughter and teasing. You developed that so well. And hey-oh! That twist about Rose and the Doctor's relationship was definitely interesting - but it didn't distract from the story at all, it enhanced it and magnified the sadness.

Perfect ending. Perfect Donna, being loud and quiet at all the right times. Perfect Doctor, giving away so much when he tries so hard not to.

Beautiful.

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. What more is there to say? You're such a great writer. I always end up loving every single one of your stories.

Thank you for writing this. It's very beautiful. :)

And I love Donna. She's just so brilliant! :D Well done!

Awww.. I loved this! Donna was perfect!

This was beautiful. Nicely written, loved the glasses case and Rubik's cube.

How come you're so good at this? It's shocking! Another amazing job! Thank you!

Oh my God, this one is lovley. I almost cried.

Ow. What a kick to the gut, that one.

Love Donna, really do. She and Rose really WOULD have got on like jam and peanut butter.

Wow... That was fantastic, to use one of the Doctor's pet phrases :) I absolutely loved it. Good ol' Donna :D Though it took a fair while for the penny to drop... lol :)

Dinny

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Bananarific 'Fic!

'Twas undoubtedly amazing and brilliantly written!

This had lotsa humour and laughability, but was blended quite perfectomundoly with a dosage of introspection and poignancy!

The characterisations of our favourite Time Travellers were very groovified and I could hear them yapping away smoothly in my head - esp Donna's!

At least Donna got her sleep in the end... Hopefully! HEHE!

Aw, now I feel like giving That Lonely Skinny Excuse Of A Time Lord a hug...

... and running off with his banana and Sonic Screwdriver! MWAHAHAHA! *clears throat* Right, where was I? ; D

aww that was sweet, and sad. I think it was cool.

the end of this nearly made me cry! fab story

this is amazing, it's really really good. i love it!

Oh so sweet. I love how nervous the Doctor gets. I actually read the sequel before this and I loved it so I figured I'd read this. I can see all the ties between the two stories. Nicely done!

*sniff sniffle* that was beautiful and adorable and brilliant and everything else all in one! I loved this story soo much! I would imagine her bed would have been a double (that Tardis is so smart ;P) and Donna was spot on characterization wise. Kudos!

Kat