what the fuck is this

I think i enjoyed it a bit too much haha

This was great, one of my favorite parings!

I really liked this story!

yay! For slashy goodness

no..no...no just...just...NO ! there not gay i mean what the NO...NO ( sick face ) :/ and yeah i know if u dident like it y did u read it ? i all ready know that is comeing but still just NO !

now THAT was sexy _

Terrible. I'm sorry, that was sloppy hun. Work on it, grammar mistakes made me a little mad. But I thought it was funny how it was like "Dallas and Johnny weremaking out on the couch" *heart*

i loved it!

I'm always afraid of what we may revielwhen talking in our sleep.

-gags- I just...No...Just...no. Darry/Pony is freaking adorable. I love it. But this...this just...no. You fail.

Ponyboy is incapable of this! INCAPABLE, I TELL YOU! It's just wrong, man. Wrrong.

-pukes-

OMG i love it! U should write a sequel! Or can u make a SodaxPony one cause thats my fav pairing ever

After watching The Outsiders the millionth time, I decided to look up some male/male stories about them. And here we are. This story was amazing and off tha' hook. ]

This would be so much better if they weren't bothers

Where to start?

Congratulations on writing something about as arousing as a Pope's sermon. Why are these guys talking so much during sex?

As for the spelling and grammar... the less said the better; I'm not here to flame. However, might I make 2 humble suggestions:

1) It helps to be consistent with capitals and full stops.

2) Its not against the law to use paragraphs during sex scenes.

Good points? Umm... takes guts to do incest, so good on you for being courageous. Just a shame about the execution, really.