This was really coll, and i also think its very well-written and cute to boot :))

I'd definitely love to see a sequel someday!

xxx

hey loved the story. Glad you wrote it, i think it is great.

OMG! YOU POSTED IT!

I LOVE IT SO MUCH!

I'm WAITING for the Prince Jericho of Fozzyville and Princess Kelly of Exhibitionland to make their debut together.

x3

love,

kellychrisadamrachel&leti.

Aww... that was a sweet story. I never thought of a fairytale like this before. You did great!

Wow awesome jorrie story! I loved how you wrote this :) the bit with Jericho was soo funni he's great I love him and John Cena! :P

Two guards carefully opened the gate. "State your business," one demanded, holding up a sword to John's neck.

"I...I'm a long time friend of Jericho's and I require his assistance. Please, tell him John Cena needs his help right away," The Champ replied, slowly sidestepping the point of the sword.

One guard took off to deliver the message while the other kept the sword pointed at John. Moments later, Jericho emerged with a grin on his face.

"John! It's so good to see you. I hear you're the champ of Rawberg these days, how's McManian treating ya?" Jericho asked, motioning for his guards to stand down.

Suddenly an arrow whizzed by Jericho's head, embedding itself into the entrance door. Chris looked up and noticed McManian's army was getting close. "Well, I take it McManian likes you just as much as he likes me," he chuckled. Chris called for his guards to man the front gate while John, Torrie, and himself entered Fozzyville and headed towards Jericho's castle.

LOL that made me laugh and the bit the about no one breaks the walls of jericho lol

Excellent work! I would love to read more stories from you esp Jorrie! :) or even review mine pwease! thanks again awesome work on your first Jorrie story!

I hope it helps with your assignment lol, Jorrie helps everything it's just got stars and shine all over it lol so perfection! :P

I loved this story. :)A perfect Jorrie story and if you have time check out my stories. thanks! :)

Excellent chapter, I already love this story I hope John wins!

Wow! awesome start I love your style of writing :) and I love Jorrie, adore them I'm sure you can tell by my pename hehe. I hope The champ "John" can win! and marry Torrie :P

I'm off to read the next chapters! Great Jorrie story, if you love Jorrie you should check out my stories all Jorrie! :) I recommend Behind his ocean eyes lol full of drama...just have a look at the stories and read whatever lol