Confused

She's pregnant but they're using condoms?

"It's okay Luke." She reassured him. "It's just been awhile." She whispered and pressed a kiss to the corner of his mouth.

She hadn't had sex with anyone since 'their last night', the same involved for Lucas. He and Brooke hadn't exactly a sex life after Keith died, and somehow, Lucas was happy about it now.

It can't be that long since they had sex!

Karen cockblocking why? She let him date the high school bicycle I REALLY doubt she would do this with LP.

Peyton's behavior is emotional roller coaster
First insecure two secs later talking about embarrassing bs like no biggie then back to emotion. I don't know what to make of it mix in with flashbacks with her mom and her issues. It's all over the place. This fic can be reedited and amended to weed out the inconsistencies and be a coherent cognizant fic at the end! Especially 2/3 last of the writing.

Dad, I found the boy I want to marry with." She said softly while she looked to Lucas and than back to her father. "It's Lucas, after all, it's Lucas. And mom said he is the one." Tears were forming behind her hazel eyes

'He had touched Brooke this way too, just the thought of that made her feel weird. Peyton really wanted to make love to Lucas in the near future, the thought of them finally as one together, as a real couple with nothing that held them back, it really made her feel happy. "

Yet she won't tell everyone

"Also Peyton was afraid that she couldn't control herself and she would make Lucas cross his lines early than agreed. And she couldn't do that to him."

Yet she keeps coming up with "creative"info to say to Lucas about her and Nathan?! So weird and creeepyy

I think this is a tactic to make Lucas jealous because she feels sooooooooo insecure about Lucas/Brooke. No other explanation.
Lucas is wisely ignoring it probably being really creeped out though. He must know she is trying to provoke him...

LMAO. "When we were together, after each game the Ravens won, he needed to 'celebrate' it with me. And even when the team lost, he wanted to be 'comforted' by me." Peyton stuck her tongue out."

Writer did you watch the show One Tree Hill? Nathan constantly cheated on Peyton and did not hide it. He was hooking up with any chick in the class after a game win or loss. Not with a gf. Nathan was not interested in anything monogamous and Peyton didn't want to touch him with a gen foot pole. Most games after, he was drunk or having random hookups.

That's it!?

"Sorry about Sunday" no explanation or real apology to Lucas

Yet she is all share my feels with his brother? Grossssss

would never be classless to talk about his brother's exsex life and plus anytime Nate tried to touch her she was grossed out by it. 2. Their sex life sucked she didn't want him to touch or kiss her even in that flashback before the Brooke/Nate sex tape was filmed.

3. No more incest with Nate/Pey please and what the fuck was her freak out with Luke about Dan?! 4. Is Peyton ok depression or bipolar mess that went WRONG!? Sickening. Peyton needs to see a doctor.

I don't know who wrote the first half the story which is terribly bad but the second half reads completely different and better with substance and joy just lines on a bad script/page.

To be fair I think both times were just a ploy anyway by Brooke. Lucas definitely insisted on wearing condoms with her.

". Peyton knew he didn't always see the point of it while they were hot and heavy, but two pregnancy scares to his side and the pill still not being a full hundred percent guarantee gave them no other choice."

Well this was a lovely story of Leyton. I loved it. I gotta say for a Belgian you did a good job writing in English. One small thing though is that you keep writing 'putted' when it should be put and 'tight' when it should be thigh. But other than that you did good with the story. I love that Lucas is there for Peyton and she there for him too. You wrote there feelings and emotions beautifully. Nice work.

Nice Leyton smut. I enjoyed it- I love the shower scene, it was steamy. I'm so happy for Leyton- glad they are enjoying each other in every way possible. This was a great update.

Whew!, I was like wth?- but the. I'm like Brooke can't be pregnant with his child. I mean when was the last time they even slept together?. Idk I'm happy for Haley and her pregnancy but I'm also scared because Nathan is not gonna be okay with this news. I knew Peyton was gonna run- I swear she should join the track team lol. I glad Haley told Luke about her pregnancy but I know she's probably scared to death. Uh, thirsty ass Brooke Davis- girl get a life and leave Peyton hubby alone please and thank you. She's such a pest. I love how Luke soothe Peyton, and let her know that he's not going to be a dad. This chapter almost gave me a heart attack lol. I liked it thou. I love how Lucas just wants to be with his bae. Can't wait to see what happens with Naley...

Oh wow. Well this was an emotional chapter. I didn't know Luke would flip out like that. I mean idk why he's so upset. Life is unpredictable and has a lot of different curveballs - so you did what you have to do to make it work out. Luke, I don't think Karen has any answer to your why's. I like how Peyton is trying to be there for both her boyfriend and his mother. I thought that was very noble of her even thou it tore her a lil bit. Great update...

I really like this chapter. I love the Peyton and Karen bonding over something so major and important. I love that talk they had about Lucas and how he wiill react to the news of Karen being pregnant with Keith's child. I wish she would tell Luke sooner than later. I like the Leyton cuddling scene it was oh so sweet. I love that Peyton not only snagged a handsome boyfriend who loves her til death do them part but she also gained a loving caring motherly figure too. I love that Karen and Peyton relationship is growing into sorta kinda like a mother- daughter one. I think that so beautiful. Great update... on to the next chapter...

Okay, I laughed so hard at Nathan comment. Luke and Peyton is like 'kill me now' lol. I like this chapter. Leyton being horn dog was good really good. I'm surprised they didn't get caught. But oh man, it was kinda embarrassing that their class moved into the same classroom they just did the nasty in. How could Luke forget to get rid of the used condom smh. Lol at Haley- I guess your best and his girlfriend was in heat and couldn't wait till they got home to do it. Loved it.. Cute Update..

Oh boi. This was interesting to say the least. I wish Peyton would just ignore and avoid Brooke like the plaque. I can't stand her geez. Wth is wrong with her- why she can't see that Luke is not even interested anymore. I hate that she can bring up all those insecurities of Peyton especially when it comes to Luke. Peyton should tell her off seriously, she's too much now. Hell I kinda want Peyton to whoop her ass just so she can shut tf up. I really didn't like that Luke is so soft towards her too. He needs to let her know she's irrelevant now. Anyways, love the Leyton interaction- it was nice. Btw, I like that Karen is keeping an eye on Leyton lol. I know they hate but it's too funny. Nice UD. Can't wait to see what happens next...