You should do a sequel in this, where either Fugaku forces Itachi to do Sasuke, or a threeway

Poor Sasuke

Poor Itachi

I knew so this is why Itachi hate his father

Like the story

Some mistakes

nothing major

HAH I WIN THE BET! Oh, sorry, I was betting to see if there was an Ita/Fuga story... and lo and behold I found this.

You have some spelling problems, but nothing major. Great job, though I'm not a fan of this pairing...

poor poor Sasuke...and Itachi but now Sasuke will probably be scarred for life :P

You wrote this in class...O_O; Good writing non the less but in school. Bravo.

Though this is very sad...[

This really pipes my interrest. I like your style and although its short i really like this fic. It made my day XD

~Zero

humina...humina...hummina...

OMG! I love it! You made my day, I was waiting for this kind of fic, I was waiting for someone who writes my fantasy! I love how Fugaku controls Itachi, how he takes the control...oh god! and Itachi crying? It was great! I want more, please, write more XD

Ok, I'm a pervet, sorry...

OMG MONICA IT WAS AWESOME GAH I HAVE TO STOP MY NOSE BLEED SEQUEL YOU MUST MAKE A SEQUEL OMG ITACHI IS SUCH A BAD BOY I LOVE IT IT WAS AWESOME MAYBE DRAG OUT THE YAOI SCENE A BIT MORE BUT GOOD STORY

I'm not a pervert, I'm not a pervert, I'm not a pervert, SHIT! I am...-cries- I acctually drooled! ...I HATE FUGAKU!...but I love Itachi a lot. I am a fricken sadist and love to see him being treated like that...THANK YOU FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WORK!

Awesome! so lovely...are you going to write more? please...

God, it's weirdo but I have to say it, it was good, interesting story, well writting, I like it! Go on with the story, write more.

Wow..i loved this...*massive noosebleed* i think you should write like, a sequal or continue it. i would love to see what happens about sasuke finding out.

~crabby

p.s. your a fantastic writer :D Feel good about your skills!