Reviews for Fallout
Guest chapter 20 . 1/21/2019
I don't know if you still read your reviews. But just read this story yesterday and wanted to say thank you :)
sfiddy chapter 20 . 11/28/2017
whatever happened that made you stop posting this story, i hope it didn't make you stop writing. This story is wonderful and i hope there's more somewhere, or if you have another pseudonym, I'd love to read more of your work. Complex plot, quality writing, solid characters, and marvy dialogue. Love it, and build you are well.

M
sfiddy chapter 18 . 11/27/2017
Go, little john!
sfiddy chapter 16 . 11/27/2017
Excellence. I continue to love their constant crap communication, suspicion, and misunderstanding. Great story.
sfiddy chapter 13 . 11/27/2017
Oh holy cow that's an intense turn of events. Richard is so much worse that you even originally make him. Love it.
sfiddy chapter 10 . 11/26/2017
okay, i really love the 'tell me one truth ' piece as a way to break down some of those walls and help transition. that worked SO well!
sfiddy chapter 9 . 11/26/2017
So I've been reading this story with delight. I really love it, very intense, beautifully written. I'm enjoying the discord, confusion, and constant thrust -parry between all the characters. There's so much great stuff here. Thanks for writing it!
DarknessAndDeath chapter 20 . 10/29/2017
update soon please. I know it has been 8 years and 4 months since you updated but I'm still hoping you haven't lose interest in this story or the guy/Marian ship. I'm excited to read about what happens next. I'm loving it. I like that guy/Marian had sex again. I like that they were being friendly to one another and that they are expecting a baby. I can't wait for guy to find out. and read about his reaction. and robins as well. I can't wait for them to get married and to be happy and raised their family together. I like that Marian and guy didn't get their happy ending straight away. and that they have a hard time trusting each other and the pain they have course each other. I like that their relationship is realistic. especially I believe you got guy's character spot and I hope you update soon. Thank you for writing and uploading this gorgeous story. great story, will be on the lookout for a update.
DarknessAndDeath chapter 19 . 10/29/2017
I like that Marian told djaq of her being with guy's child. I like that both robin and guy were knocked out and guy woke up first. I like that Allan was that please to help guy. and that no body wan to help Marian. I like that Marian is starting to think of her child. well done.
DarknessAndDeath chapter 18 . 10/29/2017
I like the confrontation between Marian, Guy and robin. I like that djaq confronted the boy. I like how it was more then I expected, in a great way. I love it. I love that guy still wants to leave. I like that Marian still wanted to help people. Great work.
DarknessAndDeath chapter 17 . 10/29/2017
I love the cliffhanger you left it on. I was wonder if this was my story what my next move would be. and I actually couldn't think of anything interesting besides Marian/guy getting their happy ending an they never see robin, the gang or the king. I like that guy told Marian the painful truth and Marian just wanted to be alone. and then Marian goes quiet and guy just tried to made her happy. I like that their is gonna be a confrontation between robin and Marian, I;m excited to read about it. I like that guy is the first to relies something is wrong because Allan doesn't knock. great chapter. well done.
DarknessAndDeath chapter 16 . 10/28/2017
I like it. I like that they are sex, your write pretty good smut. I like that guy was being more rational then Marian. I love that Marian is pregnant. I like the interactions between the two. great chapter. well done.
DarknessAndDeath chapter 15 . 10/28/2017
I like that Allan likes dogs. I like the reunion between guy/Marian. I like that guy now knows that he is not getting Nottingham. I like that guy ask Marian if she is happy. I like that Marian just wants to help. I like the cliffhanger you left it on. great chapter.
DarknessAndDeath chapter 14 . 10/28/2017
I like it, I like that Marian in a way betrayed robin. I like that Marian is gonna go find guy. I like that Marian is pissed at the king, which she has even right to. I like that Allen went with Marian. I like that Marian/robin scene, when Marian told robin about having some sort of feelings for guy. I think you did pretty good with robin/Marian, even thought I don't ship them. I'm a guy/Marian shipper at heart. But I think that you got their interactions spot on. well done.
DarknessAndDeath chapter 13 . 10/28/2017
another great chapter. I like that it took awhile for guy to get to his destination. I like that it has took already over two weeks. I like that guy doesn't kill woman.I like that guy thought of leaving Marian behind. I like that he has suffer so much and is still suffering. geez you can tell how much guy loves Marian. well done.
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