| Reviews for Betrayal |
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   starsmina chapter 4 . 3/7/2016 ~ |
| Forgetful Pizza chapter 4 . 3/8/2015 This story made me horny! I really enjoyed this story. |
| dohagrl chapter 4 . 4/2/2011 great sroty! i really liked it! |
| saki828 chapter 4 . 12/10/2010 What the? You tricked us? This was set up? Oh my you're good, but so wrong lol. |
| saki828 chapter 3 . 12/10/2010 Sometimes we just need to be fucked, like immediately, no bed no talking no handcuffs etc. I was wondering when she was going to voice that to him. Her pussy needs to take control lol. |
| saki828 chapter 2 . 12/10/2010 Hmmm he's a tease. Cock tease or is it cock block? He did actually block his own cock from getting some so he can be both right? Either way I hate both lol. I would've jumped his dick teasing me like that lol. |
| saki828 chapter 1 . 12/10/2010 When I saw the title I was like "what? betrayed? what does this have to do with anything lol?" But then I read the first couple of sentences and aha...lol. I've been there. Frankly I thought that shit only happened to me. Damn body knows when it's my hand and denies it lol. Sigh. |
| gredelina1 chapter 4 . 2/18/2010 OMG! My hubbie won't be home for several hours and I happen to read this steaming story. Must take cold shower now! |
| sweet2you chapter 4 . 12/9/2009 Man o man that was some story. I'm hot just thinking about it. |
| JayyeCullen-VampiresxTwilight chapter 1 . 11/14/2009 Wow man. Great way to start off a story lol. |
| CRAZYCARE4 chapter 4 . 10/31/2009 What a great story,I always love Dom Edward and your lemons are HOT HOT HOT. thank toy |
| StacyAnn159 chapter 4 . 7/30/2009 i didn't get that line about door to door salesman so what that was all planned like a scene? |
| greeneyedgirly chapter 4 . 7/30/2009 This was one hell of a lemon, that was so hot! Great job! |
| SGX78 chapter 4 . 6/15/2009 Love this story...hope to see more soon~ |
| readingisbliss chapter 4 . 6/10/2009 Hot. Very hot. |
