For not having seen all the Episodes I thought you'd captured everyone just perfectly!

Very well done!

Very nicely written :)

I'm guessing the burning sensation at the end is a good thing?

I loved it! I don't mean to be mean, but I don't read much Zutara that I like (though I do support it). This was great. Very good idea and I loved the ending. Great work!

Aww! That was so awesome! :3 Kawai! I love it, and I totally support that pairing! Screw her and Aang, Katara and Zuko go together so nicely. :D I loved how you put it through everyone's perspective in the group. It's so awesome and cute! :3 I liked how everyone was pretending to be oblivious to the fact that they like each other, it really seems to fit to me. :D And that end part sounded tso cute Seimei. *dreamy eyed* this one shot was pawesome my friend, good job for your first Avatar one. :3

halfdemon-kai

No, you did a great job with everything! I can imagine all the characters thinking the way you have them thinking (Toph sounds just like herself). It's also very well written. I especially like the part about the stars burning - it was maybe a little much when Zuko thought that Katara was a star, but I like how he wants to keep her from burning, and then she *does* burn when she kisses him, but in a *good* way (or at least that's how I interpret it). Very well done. :)

That was very well written. I especially liked the first bit, followed by the constant "burning" metaphor. If you're worried about OOC-ness, I don't think you have much to fear, 'cept maybe, MAYBE Toph. But I can see her helping under special circumstances, so you're probably fine. Great job!