Can I just say I love this story? Lol I love the concept that your character is interacting with both parties and is a cute fox demon (I love foxes) and she can turn into a cute little fox or a big. I also like how you made it so that Sesshomarus group is unaware of who she is and she slowly makes her place in the group and worms her way into Sesshomarus heart. There is so much room for so many different ideas and ways to go with this and that's what I like about this story. Great work. Please update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter. I am very excited to see where you go with this story. So far it is well written and detailed. Again great work and update soon! :)

"The night is full of terror." You know, when I read that, I kept thinking... "The night is dark and full of terror." Ehehe, yes, Game of Thrones addicted. Anyway, nice start!

Great story can't wait to see Seshomarus reaction wen he finds out who the little fox really is :)

Overall this story is fairly good and I would like to continue reading it but I would also suggest getting a beta. At times, and especially in the beginning chapter, extra words and incorrect verb tenses were used which made it a little more difficult to read through the story. However, the interest of the plot did help me get past many of these errors.

If you see that way about Kikyo I think we're going to get along just fine! :) Pretty good story so far!

Not bad, I like reading OC fanfics for inuyasha and this one's pretty good! It's always interesting to make up your own character isn't it?

p.s. I have an OC fanfic too, though I'm not sure the plot is as good as this one