Please continue this story I wanna read what happens next please don't leave me hanging :'(

why did i feel like I was reading the lord of the rings with the orb and the extreme forced possesivness anyway great story :D

I love this series of yours, regardless of some errors I have seen wile reading it. (Like the 's systematically becoming nothing else than a "s" added at the end of words, and so until the latter chapters of this second story.)

I hope you still plan on doing on continuing this work, and only didn't get the time to do so until now.

Take your time writing the next chapter, but please do not stop writing this story altogether. It shows a lot of promise and could become an amazing story if you can just stick to it. Great job so far though!

I have to say I love your stories! When I first started reading Twist of Fate in 2006 it really caught my attention... I hope you do get to finish your lovely story. And I hope Yasha and Kagome become mates!

Woooo, I really enjoy how the story is going, and although the slow-burning romance of Yasha and Kagome is going to kill me, that will make the coming-together that much sweeter. Please don't give up on this story, even if it takes you forever. I will wait (impatiently). :)

I'm SO HAPPY that you are updating now! This is the only inuyasha story I read anymore, and that is because it is soooo good! I was really hoping you would give Yasha his wind scar here, and I can't wait for the next chappie to find out if he kills guthrow as well as guthrick with it. I'm story to hear about your notes-that sucks. I hope you're able to recover them soon.
With best wishes
Jay eddon

No idea about Guthrow' s father, but I feel like I should know it. Could you include the chapter where he's first mentioned in the next chapter. I'd be interested to know how he was first introduced. It's was nice to see Kagome' s perspective on Yasha' s transformation and her own form. I hadn't' t considered the idea that she would be worried about him, but it makes sense. I suppose that seeing him human after everything that's happened would be an abrupt change. It must be hard for her to accept that not only is she unable to act like the full demon she was born as, but at the same time that the human boy(time traveler/Exterminator descendant) she now cares for is getting used to being a half-demon. Not to mention he has her father's old sword that her brother wants. I might have thanked you before, but it still means so much. Thank you for making any romantic development subtle and gradual. I really appreciate a story where the characters don't all of a sudden become dumb in love. Instead readers can enjoy plot development and strong secondary characters. It will be interesting to see Guthrow in a new light, other than Karamina' s old friend/Clansman or Yasha' s mentor. Speaking of secondary characters, Mousouka/Kikyo came out of nowhere for me. Where has she been again? I mean before she approached Sesshomaru? Thanks for the update and for answering my comments. I always enjoy hearing your thoughts.

-Kittyhawk09

Thanks for note. I was excited to see another update. I get the feeling that Yasha is slowing becoming Inuyasha. I mean he'll have his human history, but now with Tetsusaiga and his human nights he is seeing being human differently. I wonder how Kagome feels about it. Do you think he's changing?I'd love to hear your thoughts and look forward to chapter 15.

Kittyhawk09

The author lives. OK that's out of my system. Good chapter by the way looking forward to seeing more.

Everything seems to be coming along well. It took me a bit of time to remember who was who, but the story was written in such a way that I could remember pretty much everyone. Especially the references to the previous story. I enjoyed this chapter and that's even to the point of laughing at loud over Guthrow and Yasha' s conversation and reading the same scenes in Kagome' s vision. A drowning cat? Wow that can't be flattering comparison for anyone, especial when it's given by a group of dog demons. Thanks for the update. I look forward to reading more.

You updated! I love the story a lot! You really are a good writer! I believe in you!

Finally! I seriously thought u had given up! I am glad u r back and i hope u update way sooner than the last two times. i couldn't spot any inconsistenciesin this chapter so u r in the clear there
heres to hoping u pass ur finals
Jay eddon

Please please please update soon!

Wow this so good. I have been waiting since ever since it was pointed out that Yasha/InuYasha's eye color changed. I have loved reading this story and the one that came before. Your world is well constructed and engaging to the point where it almost seems as possible as the canon. I have enjoyed seeing each character show up in a new way but still act pretty much the same in personality. Also kudos on creating a story where the characters grow and change and I can still keep each one straight. However I must say I was very excited when Yasha changed into a demon. I mean the silver hair and claws was synonymous with his canon appearance. It was a fun plot change and I'm loving this new angle with Sango and him as Exterminator cousins and the backstory for his mother. Will we find out his father's idenity or this it not important? Oh, and I chuckled when your Kagom said "sit" for the very first time. Things just felt like a fun mirrored world of the canon universe. Thanks so much for posting this story is been a very fun read so far. Where did you get the idea for this plot? Without further ado, thank you for allowing me to become one of your new readers and I hope you PM me back with your thoughts on my insights.

-Kittyhawk09