Yeah no you waaaay over powered extremis. They died they COULD NOT take the kind of damage your letting em take. That was there weakness. It's literally not a story when the protag could lose to a henchmen.

Or watch it in like 3 to 4 minutes clips on YouTube theres a playlist.

You could just... rewatch the movie, it's pretty cheap on YouTube and amazon.

Wait wait wait you do most of this on memory? Holy fuck how good is your memory?

Even Vanko likes Stark more.

Ya know, the inner monologue really does explain a lot. Like a lot a lot. It makes a bit more sense, and gives you some insight into how you see Tony. Honestly Iron Man is one of if not my favorite superhero, and Tony is fucking brilliant always.

Olá.
Não sei se você ainda ver os comentários sobre essa fic já que estou lendo bastante tempo depois de concluída mas tenho que dizer que amei a história. Não sou uma grande conhecedora do universo Marvel, e por isso tive alguns problemas para lidar com o romance Pepper/Happy, pra mim sempre foi Pepper/Tony e sempre vai ser. kkkkkk. Mas dei um pesquisada e descobrir mais da interação deles então aceitei melhor. Esse foi o único ponto baixo na historia pra mim.
Adoraria que vc fizesse uma continuação dessa fic. Fiquei muito satisfeita com o final ,mas também curiosa com o que mais poderia se feito a partir dela, principalmente com o Extremis, a armadura da Pepper e esse novo Tony.
E nossa adorei a cena da luta da Pepper e concordo com você, deveria ter sido ela a lutar tão ferozmente e matar o Killian no final, que bom que você concertou isso na fic.

Wow. Just, wow. I love how you were able to connect a common plot thread through all three movies (I never made the “Ten Rings” connection from 1 to 3 until now). I appreciated your changes to the movies (and I’ll typically go to bat for Movie!Mandarin), and I especially love how you were able to tie together Tony’s OOC behavior in 2 with everything. Thanks for this, I really enjoyed it!

If there's one thing I love more than fanfiction, it is no doubt novelizations of movies and shit like that. I much prefer reading than watching these movies. Wonderful, wonderful job :)

whatever happened to the daughter of the man who impersonated vanko in the cell

I really dig this. Still I would like a final clash with the Mandarin at some point

I've just read this whole thing through and I love it. I can tell so much care and research went into it over time. An excellent work of fan fiction!

Really well-written.

I loved it! (Except for some of the romantic thoughts of Tony/Pepper. They were a bit too low-brow for my liking.)

Really good. Moving on to the next chapter ...