Devil fruit users only lose their ability to swim in salt water like the ocean. Water like those in a swimming pool or the bath shouldn't affect them.

I just was shown devil went to Jamaica today. That's a parody of that song... Check it out if your interested in that. Works be on YouTube

To long... The songs almost kill my interest. Just saying

The one issue that I have with this is how Naruto instantly forgives Hakari the second she shows remorse. That seems in no way believable, especially considering, and pardon my rudeness, just how much of a bitch Hakari was. If I was him I’d be much more tempted to kill her or at least beat the crap out of her than enter a blood pact with her. And we’ve seen that Naruto has that kind of rage. His rage towards Hiashi was great enough to even let the Kyuubi out. The idea that Naruto wouldn’t show any of that rage here and just have everything go back to being fine and dandy is more than a little preposterous.

Great job

Not gonna lie, that last song on chapter 18 sounds like something Brock from Pokémon would sing to Officer Jenny and Nurse Joy, two iconic Pokémon characters who are famous for having sisters, cousins, mothers, grandmothers and daughters all looking, sounding, and named the same, with only one Nurse Joy having a nice beach tan(if memory is correct, that Joy is from the Orange Island season)

In your author notes of chapter 2...

I’m sad to say you are right... there are three major types of perverts in my fellow gender.

1: closet pervs... these are the ones that watch porn in the dead of night or stares at women(or men if they hit for that team) but tries not to get caught. I like to call these types the Brook or Master Roshi type. Sure Brook, the soul king of the straw hat pirates from One Piece asks girls about seeing their panties a lot, but other than that he isn’t very perverted outwardly. Then with master Roshi... he is also with the next type but he has more control and restraint than the next type

2: next we have the kind I call the Kon(Bleach)/Franky(OnePiece) types... the super obvious, has no control and shame, doesn’t give a shit if they are openly perved, like Kon looking up Rukia dress or using Ichigo’s body to kiss random girls, or Franky and his... well... if you watched One Piece, you’d know he only wears a speedo and an open Hawaiian shirt, regardless on if he’s in town, on the Sunny, in snow, desert, rain or shine... these types are called the SUPER PERVERTS!

3: finally we have Sanji’s type... pure attraction, do anything for a girl, gets bloody noses over the littlest things for the female sex, and of course, if there are guys who are EXTACTLY LIKE SANJI, they’d freak out if a tran tried to put them in a dress to the point they’d run away, even if it’s into the sky if they kicked the ground hard enough...

Honestly I fall in all three, sad but true, I mean...

Like Sanji, I’d do anything for a women of beauty, luckily I only look for true beauty, the beauty within, unlike Sanji types who’d go for a nice rack and bubble butt

Like franky, I don’t care if I’m partly naked if I’m outside, but I do have limits to it, like if I’m in public

And like Brook... if there are any girls out there... may I see your panties?

*nami walks in, hits me on the head, calls me Brook’s second coming, and leaves*

Ow yohohohoho I think she gave me a black eye... but atlas I do not have eyes YOHOHO SKULL JOKE!

why oh why did you involve Brock with this fic? This is one piece and naruto crossover, not one crossovered with pokemon.

I read it all from start to finish! You have a wonderful story! Great job!

this is the best one piece x Naruto crossover I've ever read

Jiriaya EH?

Hmmm. The Heron tribe were the Treekeepers right? Would they know anything about the Blood Tree?

Dance with Jack O' Shadows? Ain't that Mat Cauthon's song from WoT?

Umberlee huh? Well, when on her seas, you better pray to the Bitch Queen.

You got a link to that cartoon? I can't find it and I know I heard someone mention it recently.