I thought this chapter was sweet, and then there was the end scene. WHY?!

YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I LOVE IT! Sorry for the yelling, this is just so great.

im crying but thats because im lying on my side (':

reallyyyyy great chappy 3

what? *looks around* did you just stop there? A cliff-hanger! Oh you. are. evil. Evil, I tell you. How could you?
Well, needless to say, I hope you do update soon. It's been a long time, ne?

I loved this and would love to see more if you make more.

Thanks, SK

I have to say, the whole part with the book cracked me up.

As for the end, I saw it coming a mile away. Then again, I see it in every story. And then I have to wonder, who doesn't?

Looking forward to seeing what Ed's reaction will be to this good news. There's so many ways it could go... XD

If I had a nickel for every time I squealed during this collection ... I'd have a hell of a lot of nickels. I loveee love love how much Ling there is in the last few chapters, though I'm kind of surprised that Winry agreed to elope in Xing. I wouldve thought she'd want Pinako and Gracia and Paninya and people there.

Also I wouldve liked to see Winrys reaction to Eds new jewelry, -hinthint- Juat an idea for a flashback filler chapter ;)

Update this soon please, don't know how long I can wait

for your brilliant writing and Papa!Ed .

Ok, so I love the storyline and how it has developed. It is really funny, dramatic and interesting. I'm just curious, is Winry far along in her pregnancy? Because, not that I'm an expert, but would she be able to find out that she was pregnant in less than two weeks? Like, medically... I'm not really sure how to ask it. Kind of an awkward question I think.

But I'm excited for more chapters :D

Hilarious! XD please update this!

I love brotherly EdLing! :D lol Ed got drunk and got his ear pierced

love the shoe part

Oh god, Ed has an honest to god sword, I think I need to go find a shield and hide behind it. And btw, I love the book.

Just how long was their honeymoon supposed to be?

*coughs* And didn't they use protection? Heehee.

Update soon!

Another awesome chapter here, VS. Very nicely written. Looking forward to that next update. :D

I absolutely loved this~ Fantastic! :)

~Cookie