I think it is Charlies'fault because he made Bella go out with Jacob if he had seen how much she dislikes him then all of this drama would have never happened. Bella and Edward would be together happily ever after with no problems in their life but complete love and bliss.

Was rose at lunch?

She need to let Emmett know she lie

Where is jasper?

I know im like years late but i love how much u hate jake just like me

I love how Edward and bella got together and how jasper and Alice got together.
I didn't like how Jacob hit bella or tried to force her to sleep with him.

I love this story. I can not stop reading.

You made Bella way to weak

Wow you r going to make jake abusive. Like edward is in the stories? Edweird is a lying, manipulating, controlling asshole. Unlike jake. but since you're an idiot you will make jake an abuser instead?

Hopefully it will be your last fanfic. This is absolutely the worst fic ever.
God this sucks. Thats what i think. Are you happy?

Great story. :)

Cute, entertaining story.

Phantom of the opera!

Love the story i'm definitely reading you're other stories as well33
just wanted to say that you're story is truly amazing. :)

I got to Squishy, then I started laughing! I was like oh no, was it Edward, or Charlie, or maybe even Carlisle. I was freaking out! Then I saw Squishy and I can't stop from laughing! Totally something I would do; have a funeral for a fish!