I really like that one shot, but still am little sad that it was that short! I mean come on, I like how you potrayed the Just King and how you show his room - everything I ever imagined about Edmund was in your story. Very well done job! ;)
Karola

Aw, that was brilliant! I love your writing style, and your plot was great! The story was sad but extremly good- thanks!

Own. That made me terribly sad. But I enjoyed every minute of it!

I really liked this story. Are you going to cnotinue? PLEASE DO! I really like this story. So don't ruin this for me because you are such an awesome writer. 8(

That was great! Poor Edmund