Reviews for Jasper Hale: The untold Story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hope this doesn't hurt your feelings, but it is slightly annoying to see. In a sentence you used the word 'weather' in the incorrect manner. In that certain sentence, the correct usage of the term would be 'whether'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I bet I can guess why Rosalie was so mad... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I so love this story. Please do continue with new moon. I would love to read it in jasper's POV. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it and your right couldn't see how you can really change it either. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think your story is really good. But i sometimes get confused becaue the point of view keeps on changing. You have half alices point of view and another half jaspers something like that. But I honestly LOVED it. Your story is also the longest and with that its the most intresting!. Honest. All the love GlossieCherry ps: creator of " Midnight moon" and " Morning Sun" and " A poem for your beloved". If you get the chance please read either one and review - comment or . They are quite short. |
![]() ![]() ![]() O God. Wat r they gonna do |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, Jasper's in troubl, lol Why did Alice "say its too dangeroius for you" ? Jasper was in an army of vamps n almost got killed on a regular basis. i have a feelin he can take care of himself. Was she just being over-protective? Does his past make her more protective? So many questions so little answers! Anyway, it was awsome as usual. |
![]() ![]() ![]() there so over-protective. is the single "I" at the end there 4 a reason or is that a typo? |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it! i love how he hates it wen they "keep an eye on him" he's awsome, n thats was awsome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw That was so adoarable (and dramatic, and sad, and touching and...) Good Job! I cant wait to read the new moon one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HaHa mice use of the word "mellow" ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Jasper and this is so cool because it's like what happened in Midnight Sun right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh i love how you have put this in jaspers story look forward to reading more cant wait |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh this is really god look forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() yep this is another great chapter |