Are you going to be finishing this story?

Please keep writing his story

that was so sad its a nice story but its heart breaking one i hope u update fast

that was so sad but it was so beautiful

This story makes me cry but I love it. I hope you update soon

I like this are you going to update soon please

please update soon. i feel so bad for bella. she has gone through so much and is totally messed up from it... update soon!

YAY Bella and Emmy are going to be back together!

I really hope you choose to continue this story!

It is one of my favorites! :)

I was reading through a few of your pages after being led to your story from a link on another site. I must say, that the difference between this chapter and the first in huge. You have improved on your writing, and with continued practice, you will be even better.

May I ask how old you are? If it's none of my business, I don't mind you saying so.

Anyway, if you truly have a passion for writing, keep working on it, it will only get better with practice.

Good luck!

great chapter, I love it and seeing the way Bella and Emmett think at the moment. I can't wait for the next chapter, please update asap, keep up the amazing work

COOL!

keep writing, it's really good and i feel so bad for bella! update soon? x

this is kind of depressing

OMG AMAZING STORY...i hope Bella gets better