Reviews for History In the Making
Sinthetik Angel chapter 11 . 2/5/2013
OMG love the Hellsing tie in! No better way to get someone to behave than to have Alucard show up!
Scarease chapter 11 . 1/27/2013
grand story please update.
Elliot Rose chapter 11 . 10/21/2012
I wonder if Solomon would have died in your continuation as he does in the cannon. I would have liked to have seen where that thing with Yuki would have gone. I'm unfamiliar with Hellsing, but I think I would check out the next part anyway. You should write it!
Elliot Rose chapter 9 . 10/21/2012
...wait, what!? Is Diva maybe trying to give him back because of what Solomon said.
Elliot Rose chapter 7 . 10/21/2012
Nathan cracks me up. You write him well. I also like what you do with Solomon. I super worried about Kaname!
Elliot Rose chapter 5 . 10/21/2012
omg! Does Diva want to rape Kaname like she does Riku in the cannon. This is a good story so far. But there are quite a few very minor typos, such as using the wrong tense of a verb.
Elliot Rose chapter 4 . 10/21/2012
I kinda hope Solomon hits on Yuki. I didn't expect Karl!
Elliot Rose chapter 3 . 10/21/2012
"Of course, Haji had nothing to say" LOL
Elliot Rose chapter 2 . 10/21/2012
So, Diva can hurt the vampires. That would make it hard for Kaname to get at her if he needed 2. Guess that Saya is still going to be pretty much on her own. Well, except for Hagi of course. I'm assuming the man in the office is Solomon. But why is he smiling with his eyes closed?
Elliot Rose chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
In the first section you wrote Yuki where you should have wrote Zero, towards the end. That's like the only typo I saw other than the one in the description of the story. You write very well and I felt like you had a good grasp of the characters. I'm really looking forward to this story as it crosses two of my favorites!
ASociallyAwkwardDuckling chapter 5 . 8/16/2012
I'm here to let you know that saya's friends name isn't Kiyura but is Kaori Kinjo
The Layman chapter 11 . 5/15/2012
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SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!

Yes we'd like a sequel. But seriously, MAJOR Hellsing fan talking here, and putting them in the story was both quite awesome and totally out of left field. (I'm imagining Alucard completely outclassing all the nth generation Purebloods. It's AWESOME...)

Incidentally, what part of the Blood time skip does this story happen; before or after?
Taeniaea chapter 11 . 5/14/2012
cool story
The Layman chapter 10 . 1/7/2012
Sooo...do we get to know what happens next?
Sinthetik.Angel chapter 10 . 6/16/2011
PLEASE keep going! This is an AWESOME cross over.
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