Seemed interesting from the first chapter but its become a boring dragged on peice of shit that not even about tony so dont know why someone put this in a tony community search

fABS

Good start to the story.
However, Witches DO NOT worship Satan. That is a Christian myth. Wicca is an earth based pagan religion.

Good story but disappointed there's no conversation between Gibbs and McGee about him getting shot.

I enjoyed reading this.

Vomit bag. .. this Ziva story who I can't stand

STOP END OF STORY

shame on you, mark the story as Ziva (gag me) story

Oooh, I very much enjoyed this - I had no IDEA "whodunnit" until the story told me! Very enjoyable, creative work.

Molly

Wow. This was absolutely fantastic. Everyone's voices were so dead-on, and I loved the twist with the shooting at the beginning. (I thought it was going to be Tony until he got shot in the leg.) It has a fantastic pace, and you built the tension expertly before letting it all down, and I absolutely love that Tim got to be the Big Damn Hero of this one.

Great job. Thank you so much for writing it.

"Ducky mused. "A very tangled web indeed." He glanced at his watch. "And now, ladies and gentlemen, we must depart if we are not to be late." "Late?" McGee perked up his head. "Late for what?" "Dinner, McGee," Gibbs said. "You know: the thing that you aren't getting right now." - That was SO mean of you, el jefe!

"it was Captain Beck, with Dr. Dovely beside him. He was not welcoming. "What are you doing here?" Tight. Not pleased with the NCIS intrusion on his base. "Why wasn't I informed that you would be requesting a visit?" Tony DiNozzo had been snarled at before, and by people far more frightening than Captain Beck: Gibbs, for one. He straightened—but not too much. "First of all: this is not a visit. This is an investigation, and we are investigating the scene of the crime. This was not a request, which is why you were not informed." - Hehehe.

Great story i loved it! well written too! and i must say good for tim! he took care of the National Security suits and he saved tony's life with his brilliant idea of putting a piece of the suit over dinozzo! and unforntunately he also had his teammates shoot him.. twice. But him getting shot was great for the story and i love a good tim-hurt story! i was a little upset that there wasn't so much as a "good job tim" or a "sorry we shot you tim" from gibbs or ziva but i'm sure it must have happened in one of the 'deleted scenes' _. Great story.

"If you wanted to fire me, boss, you could have just told me…"- i loved this line! it was a perfect thing for tim to say, even though he was dying, and contrary to some other comments i believe it was in character for him. it's definitely what drew me into the story from the beginning!

Well that was rather intense. Great story. Wonderful job of not letting the reader figure it out too soon.

Just found this story.

Really loved it - very detailed and true to the show.

Now to read more of your works!

Thanks

Good case.

I wanted to say that I really enjoyed your story. In fact, I just discovered your stories, and am having fun reading them all. It isn't often you find such, meaty, plotty stories. They are well-written with good characterization and mixture of dialog and description. Very nice! I'm off to read more of your work. Please do write more.