Reviews for Brave New World |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hello from switzerland. I love this fanfic. Its still good to this day. Hopefully it gets restarted, or getting new chapters. Anyway i love it. Stay awesome Ps. Your awesome |
![]() ![]() 2.4 million words?! Holy **** you are insane |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oops, sent the message too early. What I meant to say is that this story is the one and only fanfic I've ever read, but even among published books I've read this is the only story I've come back to reread at least 3 times (And that's saying something considering it's enormity). Just, since the last chapter it's been 5 years of intermittently checking to see if the story was updated or not...I understand at this level of writing and with the long break from the story it will be difficult to make sure everything connects as it should, but I do hope that there could be a note on if the story is...closed or not. Other than that, thanks for making such a great story RI2. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wait what- why is misty a- why? |
![]() ![]() ![]() just the perfect begening |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude,when's the next chapter?,it's been four years. |
![]() ![]() First off, I (and probably a lot of other people) would really really appreciate it if you continued this story, although we really wouldn’t mind if you took at least 3 years to complete it. You’re not Saproneth. Second, it would be really nice to see quality after a troll who shall remain unnamed basically spewed out “stories” on this site bashing shippings and overall just being rude. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a goddamn masterpiece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello from switzerland . I read all chaptars through and i loved all of them. They are hillarious and have nice fight scence. I don lile ot that it has no ending Greetimg ExtremeLucario |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it’s finally time. Can’t wait for the epic finale! |
![]() ![]() Deoxysribos Tarantulas |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I know who B is. In one of the earlier chapters, B says she is the only child of two of the most powerful entities in existence. Arceus's children are out, since he has multiple kids. Next most powerful couple I can think of are the guardian of light and the dragon god king. They also have one daughter, namely Bea. And B and Bea both start with B, and both could be called "B". Considering this and other facts, I think that B is Bea. Also you should add some subplots about those two. |
![]() ![]() Ri2, this is a freaking masterwork. I've only discovered this story in the past few weeks, but it has quickly risen to one of my two favorite fanfics of all time. You have created such an amazing story! Great job on this work, and |
![]() ![]() ![]() Some suggestion for new characters; Merge Lillie and her Alolan Vulpix, Shiron, and give her a severe case of avoidant personality disorder. You can decide the backstory of this version of her. Serena and her svyleon would be a good merger, but I think it would be interesting to see this version as a depressed, broken version of herself ever since her adoptive Rhyhorn mother's murder. The Litten we meet in SM 008 would be interesting as a street brawler with serious anger issues and perpetual parental abandonment issues. Add to that his brief adoption by a elderly stoutland was complicated by the latter' sudden death and we have a total mess. Ash's Rowlet would be great as a cuckoolander sniper and scientist. To add to his issues, I would like to see him with a gambling problem that literally put him in slavery. |