So good

Love it

Fuck you! Are you really that stupid for you to write this fic!?

Please update!

I really am enjoying this fic.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

fing stupid... planning like a 17 year old while acting like and thinking like a 14 year old... and he is supposed to be from the future... what the hell happened to all the character development till his 7th year... this harry feels more like he is a 14 year old boy and just got some little tid bits of future sight and not like a sent back in time version harry

Dude, I'm sorry, but... that first scene, with the toddlers? It gave me nightmares - NIGHTMARES - for the first time in over twenty years. My mind pictured my five-year-old nephew and three-year-old niece in those roles. I'm sorry man, I usually love your stories, but... I have to unFavorite you and this story, for my own sanity.

"Dewey, Screwum and Howe" is a modification of "Dewey, Cheatham & Howe," a fictional law firm from an old Three Stooges" short. It shows up all over multiple fandoms and is one of the go-to's for a fictional law firm, and is considered public domain at this point.

too bad u never finished that one. well I hope u find the inspiration for it again. sometime.
well u til then
read'ya

Ginny is pretty messed up here. Not that I mind of course, because I don’t really like her all that much as a character in Canon or most FanFic, but she’s quite broken in this Fic. And them repeating days should really be reconsidered. If they age too fast it’ll be highly suspicious and Pomfrey would notice it after about a month. Bone age is a thing, and I imagine she checks that as part of her routine checkups to make sure things heal right.

Not super happy you have shortened Sirius’ life expectancy so drastically, and I really like Shade. If she’s the third potential bond mate that’d be nice. Though that does leave open foreign bond mates potentially since Lora only mentioned there being three in the British Isles, two of which were at Hogwarts (Hermione and Luna). Gabrielle and Fleur could be the other ones if you do add more.

I hope you do open up a bond between all of the people involved in them though. It does make the best sense relationship wise.

Really? Fucking really? Apparently Bellatrix can just survive death and eat souls no problem. No explanation. No logic. No sense. Just "We need a villain and killed most of them off, even though they're all carbon copies of each other anyways." She just basically achieved would Voldemort has been trying to get for decades like its no big deal.

Seriously, why would this Harry make any kind of favorable deal with Rita? He could have just stopped at animagus and honor duels and been sitting pretty because Rita would have to accept. The Harry that kills people and locks Snape up to die slowly should not be this placating to the woman.

It's the lack of nuance that gets me about these villains. Between the Malfoys, Snape, Umbridge, and all the other deatheaters, there's not an ounce of complexity or intrigue about them. They're just completely evil, with all the horrors and outrage that implies. I mean really, all of them sharing virtually the same "horrible crimes" checklist? I would call it cartoonish if it was one of those late-night Adult Swim shows or maybe some eastern european cartoon that goes out at like 11 at night.
COuld none of them have interesting moral quandaries or philosophical differences that challenges the reader's perspective and makes them question some actions? Nope, they're all murderous, torturous, maniacal rapists.