Damn

Wow. And to think you could add in a few still, like Casey. Maybe Luke. The whole lot of them. Felix too (isn't he the one that died on the bridge). So, so sad. Well done. Lovely. Fits in perfectly with VM Noir. Thanks.

I agree with you about not writing Wallace; he's tainted only by association.

God, the part about Dick actually brought tears to my eyes. That is something he would think. Good job!

AMAZING. I love it, damn those boys are broken... I especially love Dick's story. Because he's just clueless. Clueless and broken are not good partner. But every story of these boys are just heartbreaking...

This is so incredibly good and character accurate. Its kind of hard to read (not hard grammatically) because the feelings and emotions and pain of the boys is all so real and forward, but its extremely insightful and well written.

Oh, cruel cruel Neptune.

This is a nice view into the inner workings of there characters.

Very well written.

Hey :). First of all I want to tell you, that this story is so freaking great and sad, it makes me cry everytime I read it. Especially that part about Cassidy, cause I just loved him in the show, he was so cute and desperate and stuff and I don't like the way he's a psycho killer, whose jumping off the roof :P and raping Veronica. I adore his sad eyes and that sweet smile of his and... lol, okay, this is about your story, not about my obsession with Cassidy :P. Look, Broken Boy Soldiers is one of the best stories I've ever read and I would love to translate it to czech and add it to czech fanfiction website, so people from here could read it too. If you would be so kind to let me do this, I would really appreciate it :D. Just write me an e-mail ( ) whether you would let me, or not, okay? :D Right... so... thank you very much for writing this story, cause it's so great :D. I adore it (A).

Another great story and great concept. you're a very good writer.

WOW. What a good fic. I love the idea, and how you made it all come together. The thing i really liekt hough is how every single this is factual. Good Job.

I enjoyed this.

Thank you for writing and publishing it.

this is probably one of the most brillant pieces i have ever read. it was simply amazing.

I really like the way you wrote this story especially the side comments and elaborations you placed in the parentheses. I love Dick's story, it showed a side of him which didn't show but was possibly there.

Excellent work! :)

I love this story. It's great writing and story and I love the idea completly. Also the title rocks. There were a few typos and Duncan's bit ended on a happyish tone, where as the others didn't - but it was still awesome.

This was really good writing. I loved Dick and Cassidy's because Dick does have a heart, and although what Cassidy did was horrible there was a reason for that. It's sad. . .I loved Cassidy.

I agree with you, Neptune had it out for it's boys. They were broken and beaten and. . .sad. All except Wallace, but he was a newby anyway. If he was just given time. . .oh the possibilities.

That was amazing. It was angsty and vivid and real. I really enjoyed reading it...It fit all of them so perfectly. Great job.

~Mac