Eehh... Does that mean Peter with Dhira and Lucy with Akatosh? What of Peridan? Does Lucy's love for him means less than his for her then? Ehh I don't know, coz I've always watched out for this couple ever since I found out that Peridan was courting Lucy, even gone back to precious chapters to see hidden moments between them. But I feel like everything about these two, especially Peridan's love for Lucy is so insignificant now because of Lucy's "betrayal", and the easy dismissal of what happened to Peridan after the Pevensies' departure, and Lucy's reaction, and now meeting Akatosh in their own world. Peridan/Lucy has caught my interest mostly in this story, but the whole thing with Akatosh kinda ruined it.

I don't know what else to say, this fanfic is really good, and it's amazing ... I really love Susan and Caspian, and hope the ending in a movie or book will be like this heheheheh

luvv uu 3 X

Fun fact: when I read Periden speaks, in my head he souds like Armie Hammer in the movie Mirror Mirror (2012)
So good to see Susan with the archery again, still the badass \o/
I like Rogin and the friendship between Caspian and Corin (but I think I've already said that)
I had to ideia what a minstrel is.

There is so much things that I love in this chapter and others that make me laught so much, like the "Trumpkin naked" and Corin (but sometimes looks like he really doesn't know any limits)
This chapter was so good!
Corin and Caspian friendship love it
Aravis is so cool
THE PARTS WHERE CASPIAN AND SUSAN TALK AND DANCE, OH MY GOD! Thank you very much hahaah, really hoping to see more of this.

Soooo cute. I really loved this encounter with Susan and Caspian, well done.
I also laugh with all that incident and Lord Peridan, poor lord is barely know his cause is lost.
Those thoughts of Caspian make me laugh too. Can't wait to see this couple finally together.

FINALLY SUSAN ARRIVES *rains chopped metal paper* yaaaay
Enjoying reading the parts when the others characters off the book/movie appears like the Beavers, Ms. Tumnus, Orion and etc

I've felt that same way about Mrs. Beaver, so lovely how you describe their relationship.
Akatosh sound like a dangerous, malevious and insane men
BUT, really really looking forward for Queen Susan! God, I hope she is in the next chapter, I miss her hahaha

SO GOOD TO SEE PETER, EDMUND AND LUCY!
You are building one amazing scenario for the story, congratulations.

Can't wait to see everybody!
Honestly, fanfics that have theme back in the past is not my style but I am looking forward for your story :)

I'm sorry for everything that Caspian's been through.
I liked your writing, looking forward to what awaits in the next chapters and to see Susan!

First of all - beautiful story. I love how many characters you worked in, each with their own personalities and agenda. I adore your Caspian and was so happy when Susan warmed to him. Shaheeda's death was awful. I loved your climatic scene and how Aslan was there, played a role, but not the only important role. The ending was mostly wonderful, except - I have questions. What happens to his wife? His son? And, more importantly, what about Peridan and Lucy? Did she forget him? I did love Peter reencountering Dhira. Thanks for a wonderful story for a ship I've never sailed before.

I ship Lucy x Akatosh tho. And Dhira x Corin lol. Sorry Peter and Peridan

Finding this fic might be the best thing that has ever happened to me! I am completely astounded with the pure quality of the story that you have spun. Thank you so much for the experience! It will be a treasured memory. I do have to say that my absolute favorite chapter was the last one, just because I am addicted to fluff. However, I believe that you handled the less-than-fluffy moments beautifully and with a maturity perfectly suited to the characters. I love this work. Thank you for writing it!

And yet, I ship Lucy and Akatosh. Sorry, sir Perdan (for all russian speakers out there, pun intended)

The ending left me with mixed feelings...