I like how you made the descriptions and the characters aren't ooc. Nice one-shot:D

Oml amazing

That was so cute! Even though it was a one-shot, I would've loved to see more :)

I liked it. Supression busting through at its finest.

Really awesome story! I Liked it very much:)

This is the cutest one shot I've ever read!

That Was freakin cute!

So.. much... awesomeness.. wrapped up.. in one OMG squeeee

Aww, this was so adorable. I enjoyed it so much. Thank you for writing it.

Oh this was so sweet!...Not the fighting part(though of course narusasu throwing punches at each other is always great lol) but the end where they finally made up!*squeals* Sasunaru fighting!

lol aw that was so cute! X3...iv never been in detention for anything but exept recess detention cuz i for got to get mai agenda signed .

Hello!

...Wow, I love it. The tension built until the end, the emotions, the doubt - the *bond*...

It's beautiful, and I love it.

Thank you so much for this one-shot!

Maeve, a stray French reader :)

Wow, this is passionate. Yaoi passion. Great job. But you shouldn't go to detention so often. It'd be bad for you college application.

Aw. They made up.

Sweet one-shot!