And that night, Sprit went missing. No one saw him again.

... ... eh...eh!... WHA?!

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All in all your an amazing author, and I liked your story-

Maka's eyes began to water. Her tears rushed down her cheeks. She felt Soul's finger wipe them away as he continued to kiss her with such passion. Maka never had never experienced this before. Her heart felt strong, but weak. Her mind felt clear, but dizzy. Her body felt relieved but tired. Her soul felt love, and nothing else.

Above is a paragraph from your story, it's important to remember your double negitives, for saying 'Maka never had never' experienced is the same as saying she had indeed experienced just second never cancelled out the first never.
-I think your story was extremely cool though so as long as I live shall remember this story!
trust me

i really liked the story. it was amazing. are you going to write more.

Ermagurd this story is my life

U should rlly update bc i love dis story

ahaha

Awesome fanfic!

Heehee. "sex or anything icky like that." I just love Soul. I said the same thing once.

Technician? I thought it was Meister.

See this is what you look for in a fanfiction god this story is amazing.

This story is amazing! Please write more! It's just perfect!

crona is a boy! a goddamn boy!

It's been a while, and I'm hoping everything's okay. I'm enjoying this story, and I'd love to see an update soon if it's do-able. Take care x

Asdfgghsfgjklahf THIS WAS SO CUTE I JUST AH

OMG, I'd love to be Maka. "Let's go destroy a wall or something."