Awww! This was a really sweet fic!

(Puking face)

Dear Chasyn,
The fifth chapter had its own are going to find out to is this the last chapter? If so then the ending is alright to say...hmmm... well I like the character depiction was well done once again and story length was nice. Thank you for a great read,
Sincerely,
Lovelessnobody

Dear Chasyn,
The mysterious picture was a great angle. I like the detail and change of character focus. A good surprise then Thorn being Sephira's driver. Thank you for a great read,
Sincerely,
Lovelessnobody

Dear Chasyn,
I really like this chapter with Murtagh being well Outrage and supportive for Eragon. This makes me wonder if anyother characters would appear in your story. I also would say that the length of your chapters and how are to keep the readers attention to keep reading is well done. Thanks for a great read,
Sincerely,
Lovelessnobody

Dear Chasyn,
This chapter was very creative, and I love how nice your detail was the character's appearance and the scenery. The comedy in this chapter was really funny with the sneaking into the office and the false flirting act Murtagh had done. Thank you for a great read,
Sincerely,
Lovelessnobody

Dear Chasyn,
I liked your kingdom hearts fanfiction so much that I've decided to see what other stories you have written and found this one. So the storyline is very creative and interesting. I like the way you have depicted your characters and the story so far. Thank you another great read,
Sincerity,
Lovelessnobody

Hey :DD

Surprise, surprise - it's me again Just read this story while learning maths for my exams...
I love it. It's different from those two storys of yours I actually know, but I also love it. This one is more serious, not that kind of funny-serious-stuff the other ones were this is more...well, true reallity, if you get me right. Just a bit more serious. But as I said - I love it. And I'm so so glad Saphira didn't tell him. He will live forever happily with his Brother and Thorn will make Brom shut up about them two, so they will never have problems. That's what I wish them both.
I'm really in love with Murtagh, I was in that moment I first met him during Eragon 1. But it's really hard to find a good Murtagh x Eragon FanFiction, so I'm more than glad that of all who could have written, just one of my favourite writers wrote one. Thanks for that.
And for the nice image of Garrows family, even the way you put Arya (I never liked her -.-) or the others. Thorn and Saphira...they are just so cute.

Thanks for everyting - I wanted to write much more, but I sadly have not the time yet...so...just thank you. And best wishes, until next week or well, your next Astounded Chapter :D

Hikari

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It ended just like that? *sob*
Beautiful story, truly. But not everything's resolved! *double-sob*
Brom still needs to meet Murtagh and Eragon, Eragon and Saphira need to make up and such, Arya needs to be adopted, and Thorn has to ask out Saphira, and... and... THEY ALL NEED TO BE HAPPY WITH WHO, WHAT AND WHERE THEY ALL ARE, GOSH DARN IT!
Well, enough of my whining. You did an excellent job on everything. I loved Arya, Tag, and Eragon's scheme to get Saphira's address. Katrina was awesome, too. I loved how she and Roran acted. The letters between Eragon and Saphira were adorable, too. The only thing that needed work was the slam-the-brake ending. I mean, I can handle the ending with it all being unresolved, (though it would have been nice if everything had been worked out,) but the ending was sort of like somebody was trying to make the yellow light, saw a police car, slammed the brakes, and stared sadly at the trail of cars that had made it.
Okay, this review is way too long. Beautiful story, I loved reading it, I'm now going to spend the rest of my night looking at your other stories, and all that stuff. Bye!
-ADSoP

This should really be a comedy, and I wished there was more to it.

"He didn't have to settle with the top bunk when he preferred the bottom."

...lol

Murtagh is so nice! my brother is like that. good story so far.

This story is incredibly heartbreaking. In the end she still didn't tell him the truth, huh... I actually think that she should have told them. Anyway, great story!

nkiwresnfaenefj OMG please continue this story! I MUST READ MORE! D: it's so AWESOME in so many ways!

this wasnt the ending was it? D: