| Reviews for A Broken Wing |
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   Hopelessly Jonas Bro Obsessed chapter 1 . 3/6/2009 your story is grerat, i'm sad you only have 1 chapter up. it would be AWESOME if you updated soon. |
| bananathebookworm chapter 1 . 2/27/2009 I like it, please update. |
| breathewithoutme chapter 1 . 9/6/2008 update : ) |
| Wondergirlxox chapter 1 . 8/29/2008 i liked it it was really good i wonder if it is going to get worse please update soon please thanks luv jess x |
| OneDayTheRobotsWillCry chapter 1 . 7/29/2008 I REALLY liked it! VERY good! Can't wait to see what happens! |
| sam temple chapter 1 . 7/8/2008 This was a really great start to what looks like to be a very good story. The only thing I didn't like was the number of commas that I couldn't help but notice throughout the whole chapter. Some of the sentences were overflowed with them and needed to be broken up into more sentences. Other than that, the rest was very nice. I liked the interaction between Gabriella and Troy. It was very sweet and cute. Another thing that was very good was the way you portrayed Chad. I like how Chad seems to actually have a brain and actually takes notice of the things happening around him than what I have seen in other stories. Plus the friendship between him and Troy is very realistic and friendly. The last thing I really liked was the relationship between Troy and his father. I could definitely see the tension already between the two when the two interacted. Plus the way his father actually calls him by his last name compared to his classmates does actually show some hostility which I can't wait to actually read the real thing between them. There wasn't very many grammar or spelling errors and the sentences flowed very nicely. I really liked this and I can't wait for more. Update soon. P.S. Already favoriting it. |
| 2pinkstar and 7blackberry chapter 1 . 7/8/2008 Good job this is like the one of the best story i ever read this summer...lol please post some new chapters i would be really happy if u posted please please. |
| SiriuslyConfused chapter 1 . 6/21/2008 Ahh i just love Troy angst! Never really liked coach Bolton either so this story is perfect! Please continue i'm intrigued! Update soon Lyndz xoxox |
| FalconWing chapter 1 . 6/21/2008 It's good! I like it and am looking forward to the next chapter! |
| Qanaver chapter 1 . 6/20/2008 Read many stories like this but what I look for is how the author approaches the subject. I love how you emphasize Troy's relationship with his girlfriend. |
| dreamer 3097 chapter 1 . 6/19/2008 a good start |
| cj10824 chapter 1 . 6/19/2008 Amazing start! I love this idea. Definitely continue. I love the little moments of Troyella cuteness. I love how you've written Troy's character. I can't wait for more. |
| iWizdom7 chapter 1 . 6/19/2008 I really like it! Update soon! :] |
| dramagirl237 chapter 1 . 6/19/2008 loved it. please hurry if you can |
| heatt chapter 1 . 6/19/2008 I loved it! Its so sad. Update soon! |
