awwwwww love this story...
I think why the end of the film and the book isn't like thisT_T
it's great if Susan and Caspian have happy ending in the movie or the book﹏

I'm literally crying in my bed because it's incredible! I mean you write in such a way it's amazing, congratulations :)

I love it! I want this to happen in the movie!
I am in love with this pairing a whole lot and this is like the best one shot I've read.
Thanks for posting this :D

Aaawww! This is a good story!
It's sad that the really story don't end like this. But I love it!
Thank you!

This was so romantic and should be the ending of the movie Prince Caspian and should add a little more detail about rillian and Susan and Caspians life as a family.

Aww ever perfect. I loved it! Thank you for sharing!

Awww...adorable. Adorable and amazing and perfect and heartwarming. SO sweet. It wasn't smut and it wasn't boring and it was certainly cute and not disgusting. It made me smile and it's just great.
Keep typing out your imagination.
you have a lot to say.

OMGODS YOU ARE SO AMAZING! This is the EXACT thing I was looking for. I followed and favorited everything ;-) I would love it of you continued this!

Yes that was awsome and thank u for not naming the baby caspian the 11

amei

this was a good. was a good job done on this. i liked how it all tied together.

That was so SOOO sweet and amazing and you wrote it like you were in those times :) absoluetely amazzing! Such a beautiful story! I wish this did happen in it! :)

Fabulous! I am absolutely in love with it.

Thnx for writing!

What a beautiful story... if only!

great story love it so much D

but sad that peter couldnt return to narnia and see susan and caspian's child

but im so glad and happy that susan was allowed to stay with caspian in narnia forever yay