Reviews for His Dark Place
SoMa4386 chapter 15 . 5/17/2014
SHOWERS?! What the fuck?
DarkFeatherz chapter 16 . 1/18/2014
AMAZING! Cant Wait For Chapter 17! Almost The Best Fan Fiction I've Ever Read!
MistressKitkat chapter 12 . 1/14/2014
Wonderful So Far! I Know Your Done Making It But I Thought I Might As Well Review, You Must Have Gotten Alot Of Complaints Of Chrona Being A Boy And Not A Girl But Honestly I Made That Mistake Too When I First Say Him So I Think Its Completely Fine Just Giving You A Heads Up And I Hope You Dont Take This The Wrong Way As If Im Being Rude, Thanks For Taking The Time To Write This And I Hope I Wasn't To Mean! Thanks!
darkshadowsfall1 chapter 16 . 10/22/2012
I Thought you where going to Dinah know I'm crying in my sad corner because its over and you haven't written in 3-4 years so if you are secretly laughing at my pain out there. Please plaese please oh please please written again.
Guest chapter 16 . 10/20/2012
I'm not even sure if you will get this, but if you do then you need to finish this! Maybe I can't read it all because I'm on an iPad or because I'm not a member of this website and if that's the case I would really like to be told
Guest chapter 11 . 10/20/2012
This is fantastic! You have the characters down really well, and I never would have thought of Ragnarok as a human! It's genius. Great job and I can't wait to keep reading!
baileymermaid95 chapter 16 . 5/10/2011
Why the hell haven't you finished this! It is so fnicking good! Do you need ideas? Motivation? Someone to jump on your ass till you do it! Finish this story!

By the way, I loved it!
94yonders chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
ohhhh!

how mysterious!

omg...i have a good feeling over your fanfic alaready!

i am sooooo gonna read all of it!

so for now that was such a cool introduction, you got my attention in this chapter!

GREAT JOB TO THE AUTHOR!
Ultimate Mask chapter 16 . 7/5/2010
so good please continue
hopelessromanticandie333 chapter 15 . 6/28/2010
hahhaah I love Black*Star! hes so funny and embarrassing.. poor Tsubaki.. well he just wants to shower with anyone doesnt he? xD

I love your story! very.. interesting :)

~3~~Andie (hopelessromanticandie333)
hopelessromanticandie333 chapter 16 . 6/28/2010
dude. update. now. hahaha good job on the story. I'm really interested in Soul and his new background.. why would his parents lock him up? please continue it! haha and im also enjoying the soul maka and kidd love triangle x3

3~~Andie (hopelessromanticandie333)
NakoChen chapter 15 . 3/27/2010
...THAT WAS AMAZING OH BLACKSTAR U IDIOT
INSANE KITTY XIII chapter 16 . 3/5/2010
sweet ass dude! its really funny and the love triangle of maka soul and kid is verry funny hahahaha well hope you update soon! preatty please!
BowTies13 chapter 16 . 2/26/2010
AWESOME!
listentothemelody chapter 16 . 2/18/2010
I really love this story. :)
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