Reviews for Melting
Black Fox34 chapter 17 . 1/15
I enjoyed reading Melting. Its a splended story. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your stories if they catch my eye. It's rare to see Byakuya breaking down as you had him, or how they both fell in love and became more. Same with Michico. The fact that she took to Ichigo had a good affect on everything. *Chuckles* Except for the fact they didn't become a Triad, but ehh maybe another time and another story right? Keep up the good work.
countrylovinfangirl chapter 17 . 9/15/2015
Amazing! I love it a lot!
Guest chapter 3 . 8/24/2014
So Ichigo has this little thing for Ishida? Interesting.
Hasunohana chapter 17 . 2/27/2013
just too great ! loved it ! and they are just meant to be together... And Michiko is so sweet too...
lara5170 chapter 17 . 9/22/2011
I really enjoyed this story but the time jump left me with many questions & things to Bya's wife met Ichigo she seemed a bit enamored or in awe of him. Then,when Byakuya confessed to her that,'HE's my partner',it seemed as if it had taken her a single breath to realize & accept(happily) who Ichigo was to her husband. She immediately replied with that comment about having '2 of soul society's most wanted men & they are both mine'(she giggled as she said it).I couldn't help wondering if she wanted both of them. I also wanted to know what happened in Ichi's life,during the time jump. I hope there's a sequel. This was great
lara5170 chapter 16 . 9/22/2011
This chapter had me a bit confused & wondering about few things. I had a hard time with Byakuya talking of his intense love & need of Ichigo,when he admitted that once he married he felt comfortable & hadn't thought of Ichi,plus the fact that he had no problem being intimate with his Bya to ask Ichi to stay with him thru his to see, Bya's easy comfort in his new marriage & the intimacy with his new wife,a stranger,Ichi would feel a bit betrayed/confused.I thought,he might want some distance & distraction. Maybe even tell Bya,since it's obvious that he's going to be busy with his new wife & life,Ichi might want to taste life a bit,get some (sex)experience & instead of sitting around playing 2nd.
14thEternityNightMare chapter 17 . 5/2/2011
I have to admit. When I first saw your summary that said 'you shall have to be punished', I thought it was in the...well. You know what way. But I'm glad I read it. It was really good.
NDebN chapter 17 . 3/14/2011
This was an interesting first story, I still like the writing style. But I forced myself to finish reading it, but somehow my mind cannot agree with Ichigo agreeing to be a mistress of some sort. Sure Byakuya loves Ichigo, but a part of me wonders how often Ichigo worries about their relationship. Because if I was him I would, I probably couldn't stand the thought of my lover with someone else. For the most part that's just how my feelings are.

But still I wish it was possible in life, to win the war and get both the girl and the man in your life you wish for, without excess drama. Nice story, won't be my favorite but you have enough lovely other stories that do cater to my wishes XD
gollumsfriend chapter 17 . 7/25/2010
Your story was interesting enough for me to read all at one time. For the most part, I liked it.

I just find it a bit strange that someone who likes to write stories has no concern whatsoever for simple typos. Had it not been for the sheer number of them, the story would have been easier to read...and even more enjoyable.
SinsofMidnight chapter 17 . 11/9/2009
I love the calm acceptance of the relationship...

And his wife is right! How could she fret when she has the two hottest guys in the seretei?

Very awesome; I cried when Ichigo did...
realityfling18 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
love it
SpOOnyCube chapter 17 . 3/9/2009
i usually don't fel the need to review but i feel this had to be said.

this was a great story! until the last chapter... it sort of came form out of nowhere and you skipped a large part of the story... i think anyways.

all in all it was good but you ended it out of nowhere.
KitaraStrife chapter 17 . 1/25/2009
Great job with the entire thing. I probably would've done the same exact thing that you did at the end of this and totally just pulled a time skip. XD

And part of me is screaming that you should've ended this with smut, but I'm going to go smother that part with a pillow now. Excuse me please. {goes and does just what she said}
KitaraStrife chapter 16 . 1/25/2009
Okay, Michico - DAMN it's weird typing that name with a "C" instead of a "K" at the end! - is cool what with how she's taking everything in stride and seeming to make the best of the situation Ichigo's summons has put her in. XD Though... her ending sentence kinda creeped the hell outta me. :/
KitaraStrife chapter 15 . 1/25/2009
Renji should be throwing a book at Ichigo's head instead; that's what I would do. XD
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