This story...I constantly come back to it and each time I fall in love all over again. I feel like you nailed Naru's character which is so hard to do!

loved it! so much fluff I'm gonna suffocate!

yay! that was awesome!

My favorite part is the "we suck at this" line. :) Don't we all feel like that?

This is so. Freaking. Cute!

I really, REALLY love it!

Omg this was so AWESOME! I loved it!

Please update soon. Your killing me here

Update echoes, i'm dying on that one!
Got my attention, it's really good!

Hehehehhe, this is so cute!

So cute, and funny.

Brilliance! I only wish your other stories were complete! ):

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My favorite by far.

SO good

This was soo cute! I LOVED IT!

I've only recently saw the joys of Ghost Hunt two weeks ago, and then looked up everything else about it after that including the manga and its books. Needless to say I was hooked.

So at the beginning of this week I decided to see how many good fics I could find between Naru and Mai. Plainly put they were disappointing. And I mean, depression worthy type of disappointing. I went through ALL fanfics that had the pairing of those two on this site. . . I had given up hope on actually finding one worth its salt enough that I would want to reread it and actually have it on my favorites.

You should be honored. Your one-shot fit my criteria and took all my disappointment away. The characters were beautifully in character, you did well with that Difficult Naru and the fluff was amazing and made me happy and warm inside. It's a sad thing that the story was so short, but the size doesn't matter, because you put so much awesome in this that it more than makes up for the fact it actually ends. (Because I would love it if it had been continued.)

I am very happy I was able to come across this, even after my countless failed searches for a good Naru/Mai story. Thank you so much for having this up here and sorry for the long review. :)

Satisfied Customer,

The Scribe