Miss this story! Really one of the best!

I love your story, if you wouldnt mind, I would love it if you would email me if you make the next chapter to your wonderful story, if not, i understand. But if you will, plz email me it at

web2theweb yahoo .com
Just subtract the spaces in my email, and email me it , I will respond.
Thank you,
Web2theweb1

You are such a liar.

You haven't written in a while, are you sure you will be updating again?

"...she felt the wisp of a story sparkle inside her, a vague idea beginning to define itself in her mind." Oh, yes. That's how it feels.

There were a couple of places in this chapter that I felt certain you've been influenced by Anne of Green Gables. One was when Aunt Louise retorts, "I certainly am... And don't you ever let anyone tell you otherwise..." That was so like Diana's aunt.

I was drawn into Wendy's world in this chapter. Her fear of growing up and being limited by her expected role as a woman is well-expressed, I think. I hope Peter will come soon! - M.T.

What a lovely first chapter! I feel for Wendy. I liked how you took the omniscient narrative and juxtaposed Wendy's nervousness with the humorous thoughts of the other girls. Poor Jack Taylor. He hasn't a chance. -M.T.

Hey this never got updated! :(

update soon!

Please keep going

COME ON! I LOVE THIS STORY AND IT SHOULD BE UPDATED!

Fooled by two author's notes in a row! Ah, well it cannot be helped. I, on behalf of the readers, appreciate it very much that you care enough about your readers to update your whereabouts and intentions for your stories. Most writers on here do not do that and even though it may disappoint readers with a false alarm of a chapter, I am glad to know that you are not giving up this story!

It would be such a shame because this is definitely the first time I've seen this kind of plot-line where Peter Pan is actually stuck in London. He is still so ignorant to certain feelings that are not "important" in the place of childish freedom and I am glad that you had touched on that. Your characterization of everyone, Peter and Wendy especially, are on the dot! And usually I don't place much weight on age in certain scenarios but I like how you had decided to leave Wendy in the transition stage, where she is not quite an adult yet but she knows there are more things out there than having fun all day and such - but still ignorant to the attentions of courting and indecisive about responsibility. I have a feeling that Peter will teach her a lot of things (however unintentionally) as much as she will teach him.

Cheers to hoping that you will come back! You have left us with such a good cliff-hanger and I have a feeling that's where things will start to fly off the handle for the two stars.

Please continue! I know your still posting Stories so please go on!

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WHY YOU MAKE ME FEEL LIKE THIS? D:

I'll be looking forward to your next update. :)

I love this story but i've been waiting on it for more than a year now. Please update it.

I am pleased you shall update this. It is quite a lovely story.