Reviews for The Visitor |
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DreamedSilverWings chapter 1 . 12/7/2019 Very funny but at the same time it was hot as hell haha love it! |
RukiYuki chapter 1 . 6/15/2017 Awww ... tottaly hot |
whitealmond chapter 1 . 2/22/2015 Really hot and really hilarious XD loved the cameos from the other characters, especially Keigo and Uryu hahaha |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2014 Most perverted , killing by giving mental disease criminal. Tell me you are a girl or i'll kill ya by cursing! |
Der Penismann chapter 1 . 5/27/2014 got rock hard u piece of shit |
Dreaming101 chapter 1 . 12/2/2012 Hahha! Love this! Great job! |
zero09q chapter 1 . 6/16/2012 hehehe I loved it |
IchigoRukiaforever chapter 1 . 6/17/2011 Amazing. Mindblowing! |
live87 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011 :) |
lovemydogs82 chapter 1 . 8/25/2010 Oh my gosh, that was hilarious (and, of course, hot at the end;)! |
ijustwanttodeletethisplx chapter 1 . 4/24/2010 Wow. I am going off to read all the rest of your stories now. |
stormcrowley chapter 1 . 3/27/2010 I've the feeling that if more women were like Rukia, more men would cheerfully make the trip to the pharmacy once a month. ;) Good writing on this and your other works so far; you've mostly just been focusing on the characters themselves and their relationships (or lack thereof), and leaving out most of the supernatural stuff. This is actually harder than it sounds, so well done. |
JadeRent chapter 1 . 10/18/2009 Holy crap how have I not reviewed this yet? I was perusing some older fics and reacquainted myself with your story and then lo and behold, my review is absent in the listing! I'm so sorry! What I love about your fic and your writing is that you keep it completely realistic with the awkwardness of performing such intimate acts even when it's with a lover. Rukia's nervous, Ichigo's nervous while ecstatic at the same time. And it just rounds up into something hot, funny, and completely endearing because they obviously love each other. Great job! If I must say, best bj I've ever read XD |
pamianime chapter 1 . 8/19/2009 OMG how cute! you just made me love ichigo more than i already do now and that is a lot since i love him too much for words and again...SMOKIN HOT! haha i think this is one of my fav one-shots...wait darn it i love all your one-shots too much! its hard to choose! |
Los Grotos chapter 1 . 8/13/2009 lmao... ichigo's trained... what a lucky dog.. |