OK. Its been awhile since the books & watching the movies, so not sure when this is happening. I.e. what happened before. But love the way Luna holds Harry's hand.

Good

Why do people keep referencing that stupid movie ? "When man-whore met slut". Yeah, great model to build your relationship on.

Hermione is a bloody hypocrite. She yelled at Harry for his rant at Mcgonagall which she rightly deserved and made him apologise. Now she's yelling at Mcgonagall when she wants to help. I hate hypocritical people. That means right now I am really hating hermione.

Nice story!

This makes me Wonder if they give the "Talk" in schools in England because i had it when i was 9 or 10 at school in a class called "Biological introductions" heh good on you though
this was great!

i love all the movie references Especially three amigos
EXCELLENT story thus far
-Jesse-

I'm very impressed with your story so far!

I'm very surprised at how well your story is written. There seems to be alot of effort put into keeping everyone in character, but there is also alot of emotion added to them as well. Harry has no other family except Sirius, so it's only natural that he would feel this depressed. I'm glad you've acknowledged that Ron and Hermoine consider Harry family, though. They really have been friends long enough and are close enough to consider him a brother by now.

I really love how you kept Luna in character. She worries about Harry, but only SUBTLY tries to help him and ease his pain (mostly by distracting him with something random). That REALLY seems like something Luna would do, and I'm glad you've done such a good job with her so far.

Also, you're spelling and grammar is excellent! The only mistake I found was a missing quotation mark, which is INSANELY better than some of the previous FF I've read.

I'm enjoying the story so far, so I'll keep reading and giving my impressions as I go.

Have enjoyed this story very much hope you keep it going. Just hope that there will be a LADY POTTER, and a LADY BLACK.
I'm 70 yrs. and have just found FF. hope you have many more stories in you. THANKS.

Albus: his picture is next to the entry on passive/aggressive behavior and ego-mania and sociopathy. You have captured him quite well: insane, close-minded, delusions of god-hood, inability to discern right and wrong from his own desires and detestations.

nice

Damn. This pair of chapters was intense. Fine work good sir!

Top notch writing, as it always is! Keep at it!

I really really loved this story when it started. A good Harry Luna is rare. But my interest started to diminish when Hermione was added to the relationship. Authors tend to make Hermione the alpha of any Harry threesomes and the other partners go to the background. Hermione is always right and it detracts from the story. I liked in your story that Hermione was to late and Luna got Harry. I slowly lost interest the more preeminent Hermione became. But I really like the rest of the story.

why the hell didnt Emma snap his bloody wand?

That would be my FIRST instinct to defend against a mage in that realm, snap their friggin wand! You KNOW they cant easily cast much without it, even if they can that's their amplifier, break that, they're weaker.

Ugh...i love your story, and i'm sure there's a reason why she didnt, but uuuuugh. Battle logic is drilled in my head and when it comes to the defense of everyone i care about my first instinct is always to disable the target FULLY, weapons, mobility, even comprehension.

Keep it up!