Absolutely LOVED this fiction. Perfect, beautiful... it's brilliant.

Really good story!

*SIGH OF RELIEF* Murphy is okay! Sorta... What an emotional ride! Thanks for that. I'll definitely be heading over to read Devil in Manhattan next. Man...Murphy's sobs...broke my heart a bit... Excellent work. :)

Excellent observation! The Saints can't be seen as beatable! Stilling enjoying this! :)

Yay, Murphy's not dead! In was a bit nervous there for a while. ;) I'm really enjoying this! Great job on the voices too. Aw, but poor ol' Da... And uh oh, who has Murphy and what are they planning?! Must. Keep. Reading! :)

I'm staying up slightly past my bed time, but i had to finish this story! I just had to! My dear, I can't wait to read the sequel later! Murphy needs a hug! :(

WADR and Humbly Yours,

Pyro Psychotic

PS: FIre and electricity should never be used for evil, only to light cigarettes(slightly evil), burn marshmallows or get undesriable things away from you. Or to help me be a Pyro!

Dang! You really know how punch a girl in the gut and then help her up afterward! I'm really feeling sorry for Murphy! Yer makin me want ta be nice to im in my fics jus b'cus! And I should tell you no one can claim that title, other than you now!

Also you may want to look into getting a beta, if you don't have one. I've seen quite a few mistakes, but thanks to my wretched memory I really con't remember where they all are. Except that I think some are in this chapter. But if you don't have a beta, I'll offer to. And if you don't want one, you can tell me to fuck off! I'm used to it, livin in a small backasswards back alley abortion imitation of a town. Try sayin that five times fast! Or ou could also try bare, bloody body. Always stumps them!

(to myself: Shut Up! Yer ramblin' again!) Sorry for the ramblin! Good whatever it is where you are and may your Muse always be muse-cal!

WADR,

Pyro Psychotic

I love this fic so far! i can't wait to continue reading, though I have to go to bed. Seeing awesome fics makes me scared to post my own, but it also inspires me to work at and hone my craft so I can have reviews like this one day!

I also agree that Within Temptation is an awesome band and all of their songs are beautiful. Though my favorites are The Howling, Ice Queen and Memories. My dog doesn't quite like them because he spent about five minutes biting his tail and turning in circles until I put my headphones on and listened to WT quietly. Now he's eating the rugs to show his discontent.

Sorry for the random moment. When i really like something i start to ramble about other stuff until I figure out something to say. Really do truly love this story and i shall continue it later.

WADR,(not in a bad way)

Pyro Psychotic

Oh wow, how completely fucked up!

The exhange between Connor and Anna in the flash back was brilliant. Poor Murphy. Hope you didn't leave him in the dark too long.

Great chapter and way to get things going I can already tell I'm gonna like Anna

I think I'm really gonna like your story. The crack about their mother was hilarious.

Nice, can't wait for the sequel to see more of Connor and Murphy.

Yay! I approve! Well done, can't wait for more!

~Saoirse

Hi, yes. This is not for this story, but I don't know how to make you continue writing that Odo and Kira have a daughter story. I loved continue. I need to know what happens. And, the beginning of this story sounds good.