I really like it but it changes the movie.. Oh well how do I care!

Awesomely done *thumbs up!*

great story

AH that was so good!

i usually dont like one shots but that one was so good.

i am so glad i read it!

aw :)

It's obvious how much your writing has grown from this one shot, to your latest one-shot. Even here, though, it's miles beyond most of the CR fics ive encountered. Very, very cute. :)

I thought you said the sequel was coming? Lol

I hope it still is. Like soon.

:D

"...imprinting the feel of her soft skin into his memory."

What a fabulous line. It conveys so much, in so few words. You've got tactile sensation, sensuality, thought process, and the emotion behind it. Nice job.

This is good enough by itself. It was cute. Thanks for posting.

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Have a great New Year!

you should definitely do a sequal to this! its so cute and I really want more!

has anyone told u lately that u are an fantastical amazing writer? cause if not they shouldve and i definately am! i love this story smitchie is my second favorite pairing for cr(i think ive already established my first) and i love this story! Disney could take a lesson from you! so good!

Wow! Just wow! I don't know what else to say! You're an AMAZING writer, honestly! I'm going to go read some more stuff from your page now...

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A-MA-ZING! love all the extra details and thoughts and stuff! awesome DD

Amazing! Gosh, so friggin' amazing. I loved it. You are a great writer, I mean it. You rock! :D

I really liked this stroy. It should have played out like this. I think you should do a sequel to this maybe like what happens after camp or Final Jam.

That was a great story. Liked how much emotion on both their parts you conveyed.

Really interesting to read.