I couldn't get to the end i stopped at chapter 7 . Zoro about to crying all the time and Sanji being such an ass... they are too OOC I didnt t liked it. I can like angst but not with OOC ,I think the characters Kind of lost their personality ,I didnt recognize them .that's too bad the first chapters Were very good. :/ I think you should warn your readers about the OOC

Love it

La fin, not le

Hot ending! I loved the story, it was so angst and perfect. I enjoyed reading very much! _

o.o you know..the end of this didn't make up for the pain of most of it...but it was still damn good...

i've read this like. so many times...and right here at end of this chapter..I hate what Sanji said..But on the same token, you have to realize he's severely uncomfortable he's having issues with his sexuality..and Zoro is stressing him. He's trying to actively convince Sanji that he's gay. He's also emotionally pressuring the man. Even as desperate as he was feeling in that moment...He had to know Sanji would lash out...especially out of fear and dicomfort

couldn't get to the end. and i'm so annoyed about that because i fucking hate when i can't finish something. but this story is so antagonistic. it is so full of angry friction and stupid mean words and trying to push people to do what you want them to do and so much desperation and it's not like either of them really...and it was sp painful to read..the writing was good...but so much conflict without a break...was bitter on my palate..

*CRIES*
you are a gorgeous writer. i cannot believe zoro would forgive sanji for that but i'm glad he did. :((((((((
i know the ending and epilogue are happy but i still feel sad! whyyyyyy
maybe it's because it's over...

i'm literally crying right now SANJI NO
oh my god zoro poor bby AAAAGHHH
I HATE EVERYONE
(meaning this story is great and I should continue reading before i kill someone)

Nicely done. I liked the story. Even if Sanji was really pathetic... (more or less)

PS: The sex was hot o.o

I feel so sorry for Sanji

Now you made me curious and wonder if Zoro and Luffy actually do have private rooms. Sounds like something Iceberg and Franky will add to the ship

By far THE MOST fucking amazing story ever 3

oh gosh. withdrawls are the worst and i can only imagine how sanji is going to see the next day. and poor zoro, i dont know how he feels about all that but its gotta be something.

Not bad i like it. I must say the last chapter ours the best. Hot and sexy. Lol thank you