Fantastic Oneshot. I certainly hope you have more Peter/Claire stories cause i'm going check after this review. Great and nice oneshot though and I hope you have more inspiration in the future for more stories of this variety and I wish you luck with your future stories and chapters.
I also think a rewrite would be in order for this story with your Original idea. I think that Claire messing with Peter in the taunting of him would be fantastic fun. Anyway i'm rambling so i'm done now. Thanks again for a great read.

Wow... This was just great... If you don't mind I could probably write a funny joking insert for this in a jiff, and it could easily fit right into this and have it still be in context. Although, you probably would mind, and I probably shouldn't... Ah, well. It was just a thought... anyway...

I can't believe how comfortable I'm getting with the whole Paire thing... it seems so wrong, yet it's so right! It's crazy!

Definitely worth it.

hahaha. loved the authors note at the end. really nice story. :) I loved the line "At least youll have company"

it sucks that Peter and claire are related :(

ahh! (that was me squealing) I really loved that haha and they just kiss at the end! LOOVOEE IT!

I loved the ending! Bravo!

Great story! The beginning was perfect, really capturing the problem from the start.

wonderful. how they are both feeling the same, fighting it and then simply letting go because its right, right for them. I like it

oh i thought it was wonderful. really well written. (:

Gah loved this! Awesome job!

You write Paire so well! There's nothing else I can say really...just that this really cheered me up. :) Brilliant!